I can't believe this is off the cuff, it's so well done! I was crying my eyes out by the end of chapter 1 and then immediately laughed as long as Lorelei did at Luke's letter at the start of chapter 2 XD thank you using your talents to feed my javajunkie addiction!

I don't know if you still get these reviews, but I had to write something. I actually cried when Luke left for Utah. Can't say I've had that strong of a reaction to a story before but I knew it was going to end up alright in the end. Beautiful love story that shows the depth of feelings for Luke and Lorelai! I'm slowly reading every one of your stories and haven't been disappointed once!

Yet again another awesome story added to my favs. You're amazing!

I teared up when they were saying good bye and the letter writing. I kind of got upset that it took Lorelai that long to write back, but I'm glad she did.

And the shower scene... Hot! Hahaha

BTW, I reviewed as Guest directly prior to this review. Hadn't noticed I wasn't logged in.
Seriously, many compliments to you for being able to write a story this complex and interesting with so few triggers and no outline.
Everything flows so nicely and makes sense with the next step. Also, your reworking of the canon timeline worked very well for this story.

Having wept my way through the bittersweet glorious first two chapters, I looked forward to the third. It was beautiful.
Luke did bug me a bit, though, in that he didn't come by her place first. Nor did he call or write to say he was moving back, and all of this after his aunt had told him what he needed to hear again.

Really enjoyed this fic :)
LBx

my thoughts: i have loved many of your stories, I have about 10 more to read, and this is one of those that I do love. Great job!

Kirk saw them? Wow, that is a twist and a half.
Also, my heart is breaking for them :' (

Okaaay thats much better.

I have to say, your writing is unreal! Every single story gets me, I rarely feel as though I am there. You are seriously talented!

For this particular story, it was no exception. It was a tad dramatic but entertaining nonetheless. I look forward to your stories. They always capture the characters perfectly! Hopefully you continue to write more in the future!

Sooo sad. Still tears in my eyes haha. Takes great writing to inspire such emotion. Good job on this chapter!

It seems I had by-passed all of your earlier work... and in some ways I am glad because it means discovering them now. Although it means getting nothing done with my day...

Well.

You have done it again. I was absolutely dying inside. I had the tears in my eyes and the heart pain and the nervousness and I had to keep forcing myself to go back and read every word as I just kept rushing through to the next thing, the next thing, the next thing.

Good your stories make me miss the show. But then I watch re-runs and think... actually, maybe the show makes me miss your stories. Like seriously. Here they're rerunning 6&7. And really, there is no competition.

I love, love, love them. Write. Just write... you really could make something big of your abilities... Make something... yaknow, more profitable than FanFic. But whilst you're doing that, don't you dare forget to write more of these!

Another rip-roaring story that has left me a little emotionally exhausted. Kudos.

I loved this! I admit I was a bit put off at first but Luke leaving but I had faith that you would use it for good and you did. I really enjoyed this one, especially this chapter. Great work!

For the last few days, weeks?, I've been reading every story you've written one after another. I started with those on Black white and read and was overjoyed to see you had more on . You do a wonderful job of creating sexual tension and describing the relationship that develops between L&L. Then there is the culmination with sex which you do a good job of varying. I do like re-union stories though so I wish you had more post-partings. Also I think it would be a stretch to write about their relationship deepening and developing. Keep up the good work and thanks for the hours of entertainment.

i love this! i wish you continued it a little further though! but its great! i could feel lorelai's hurt, which makes a great story!

this is amazing!...one of the best stories I've ever read. It was really different from everything out there and you wrote it so well.

Love all your stories, I'm re-reading all of them at the moment