not sure i like the variation in verb tenses

I think Gibbs would expire on the spot if Kate walked up to him in a bikini... But what a way to go ;) hahaha

oh, well! whew! i've never been much of a 'shipper' between team -members, but i really loved kate, and still really love jethro, and why the hell should he NOT have such a cool chick as her, rule#12 be damned!

She's a heck of a lot better than Jennie, and he deserves her! there, i said it! (just don't tell anyone!) great fic, by the way, really well-written ajd, well...descriptive..! wowser!

:D You did great with this writing style!

Just had to drop a quick review-I absolutely love this fic. I have to giggle every time I read it (and since I've been consistently trying to avoid the fact that "Twilight" happens at the end of season 2, I've been reading a lot of KIBBS lately). At any rate, it's very wry and witty and sounds a great deal like what I imagine Gibbs' thoughts would...great job!

Oh pure Gibbs and Kate fluff. Liked it! And I think the writning style fitted nicely with the story.

I really enjoyed this fic, and the style of writing. I'd like to read more like it!

I like this style. It has wit and simplicity. The story itself has a nice hazy sunny languor and the heat is very real. Nice work!

Hey,

GR8 story!

kate and gibbs are so cute together!

thanx 4 a nice read:)

Fantastic writing.I enjoyed reading it.

I love your story, love your new style, love your topic...KIBBS of course

please keep going

That was awesome and if your experimenting with a new writing style I like it.

E!

Hey,

I don't know what you're doing. But you should do more of it.

I enjoyed this. Even concidering the fact I find KIBBS a little disturbing. But Like I said, I enjoyed it.

Hope to hear more from you soon.

Lee

I like this "drabble" for a change. just a piece of fluff.. but still very well written.