Wow. I really loved this piece! I have been reading up on your works about Gilmore Girls. I started with the newest with Logan and Rory, but this is the best fan fiction I've read on this site yet! The plot was engrossing, the characters were familiar and real, the twists in Rory's life about having a daughter and her marriage were realistic, and my eyes were glued to the screen the entire time I was reading this! I really really enjoyed this and I can't wait until you write more, more, more!

wow...thats so sad...! jess was always my favorite guy in that show! Dean was too nice and Logan...well. i didnt have a problem with logan, i just liked jess more! great story! SO SAD!

Catch you on the flip side!

Sailor Tin Foil

Very good, but very sad.

I gotta say this version is much much MUCH better. Grammatically correct, believable plot [very sad and uplifting at the same time], and overall it reads much better. Nice edit!

That was okay. I agree with the previous reviewer, it was pretty rushed. Especially with the whole "you have a daughter" thing. I was sorta expecting a bigger reaction from Jess, instead of just his classic "huh". They were pretty OOC as well. But I think it was really sad and I love the whole plot. Good job.

aww i love this story i almost started to cry it was incredibly done

bb4n

im just going to be direct, but truthful to you. i really didnt like this fic.

1. spell check...just some of the words you spelled wrong: (loose-lose, cuz-cause or because)

2. the story was too rushed. you jammed in way too much information at once: (When you had

rory tell jess that he had a daughter then you switcheed right over to her saying "did you get

my letter."-SEGUE!

3. Some parts of the story just dont seem realistic at all.

This was so sad!

I liked it!

That was the best oneshot I ever read!

so sad! but amazing! i loved it!

woah that was good.