This is lovely, thanks!

So goood, loved it!

Aw. I cant help but feel as if this could totally work with the actual manga or anime; I can see this happening! Great job!

This is.. really sweet. I love how Sasuke slowly mellows, and softens. And I like how Naruto is there to help it happen. C: Very cute - keep up the good work~! :D

Aw, Naruto's adorable in this. So awkward, though!

I wished this was how it really happened... -sniffles- I miss seeing my baby! Damn you, Orochimaru!

I really do wish this was how it happened. It would've increased Kishi's profit tenfold! xD Alright, enough of my lame humor...I adored reading this. Everything felt so real and I love Naruto even more now. His flustered self (well, perhaps it was just me who thought he was flustered) was an adorable sight to imagine. It was quite a long read, something that strained me due to my laziness but thank gods I got over it and finished it because it was well worth it. I don't need to waste anymore of your time, so thank you for writing this! It was much appreciated 3

That was wonderfully written. I love your flustered!Naruto as well, lol.

Anywho, great job ;)

XP stupid sasuke orochimaru isn't gonna help

You chipped my heart a little, y'know? But I'm in love anyways. And there's my favorite thing in this fic, Naruto being awkward. Hn, that's a funny word. Awkward.

That was SO sweet! It just made me want to go "Aw!".

Beans

Ooh, that was good. Nice writing.

-Ume

Very cute and angsty and still cute. o.0

InsaneBlackHeart

Aww, so sweet, so sad. Sasuke without a voice, finally learns that maybe it's okay to trust. Loved it!

That was really cool! I love how you kept them so in-character. I really like this, it's a cool story!

aww. :D This made me smile. I loved it. Sasuke needs a punch in the face. A big punch. lol. This was great. :D