Reviews for A Very Modest Proposal
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I very much enjoyed reading that. It's not every day that Ryou acts psychotic.
RedundantRedundancy chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
That made absolutely no sense.

I loved it.
Shantih chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
They ARE wildly OOC, and I LOVE it. Good lord, if only the original series had been more like this. In all honesty, I think you should go kidnap Kazuki Takahashi and hold him in an undisclosed location until he lets you write season 6. I'll help. D

This entire story was made of w1n, but I have to say my favourite part had to be Yugi's little soliloquy on Pegsy. "His empty eye socket is 'unbecoming'." LMFAO. So classy.

I have to ask, did you do anything special to get this good at writing? Drink potion? Take a class? Sell your soul to Mai? o.O I must know! XD

Gah, sorry I keep spamming your inbox with reviews. Must curb enthusiasm. (I tend to be a very enthusiastic person).

Anyway, good luck with your finals and such! Don't let the man get you down!
Ceilo chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
OOC Ryou is the best kind of ryou there is. I hate it when people make him a little wimp. This is great.
pipecleanerFlowers chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
lol tat was hilariously random i mean wtf? ryou jumped out of a window? impossible! yay for randomness

i liked the way you made them interact with eachother, despite being a bit ooc
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I'm actually a tad bit confused.

Ryou's more sadistic than normal; Bakura has a broken nose. Hehe, Yugi is pompous... HAHAHA!

This was good, and just because of the title, I *had* to read it. "A Modest Proposal;" did you know the original story is a crack-suggestion to eat homeless babies to both lower the population and conserve food resources? Gotta love British Literature.

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
Determined chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
ROTFLMAO! ryou jumps outta a window for freaking ring, man was he deseprate...who wouldn't be though, for Bakura. XD(drool)
Neonn chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Wow. Just, wow. I actually liked the characterization-it was a refreshing change from how they normally are portrayed, but still true. Great work, hilarious, you have real talent!
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
OK... excuse me while I say... WTF?

That was so.. random! And weird! O.o

I mean, you've got some great descriptions in there and funny dialogue between Ryou and Bakura

but WHY has Ryou gone insane and WHY did Bakura chew his ears?

I mean, it's smexy when he nibbles them (yaoi 3) but CHEWING?

And btw, what exactly does OOC mean? Sorry, I've seen it on a bunch of fics and I'm beginning to wonder..

No offense meant to the actual story which was well written, but I TOTALLY DON'T GET THE STORYLINE.

Good work tho! ]
Flinched chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I will now treasure my ears for life.

I enjoyed it though! Very well written, there's no 'I'm-so-mopey-I-think-I'm-gonna-cry' Ryou in sight! I think you made Ryou delightfully rebellious, and I love a rebellious Ryou! And of course, Yami Bakura just had to be stark raving mad, or it just wouldn't have worked!

But still. The ears. Ouch. I was actually clutching my ears reading this. But. That's good... I think.

Uh. Yeah. I'm adding this to my favourites!
Leopardus Pardalis chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Don't have the time to write a long reveiw, but I wanted to let you know I loved it.
OxygenForLosers chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
...you know, claim them to be out of character all you want, but I found the characterization in this refreshing. It's nice to see the banter, the different possibilities in this relationship rather than Ryou crying everywhere and Bakura beating him up. Kudos.
wallsmex chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
I can't stand it anymore, I'll have to read and fav all your stories. You are just brilliant.

And I loved them in this. Actually, I don't think they were THAT out of character - the personalities you gave them, I can actually see that working O_o not so much Ryou, maybe, but gah. *FAV*
Yami hitokiri chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
I like this because Ryou is so freaking wild and crazy and is totally wearing the pants in this relationship. THey are quorky and I love them. ALthough... chewing his ears off was a little disturbing for me. You ended very nicely as well. Pegasus with the empty eye socket... haha.
Serafin chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
You know what? You are God.

Your Stories always seem to have a deeper meaning. And youre not making Ryou the poor-cute-lil-uke-whos-madly-in-love-with-his-seme-and-only-wants-him-to -love-him-back. Man, Im so tired of these annoying situations, and here you go and bring so many new situations I could read over and over again. Please keep on writing and Please continue Faust, too!
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