| Reviews for A Very Modest Proposal |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 I very much enjoyed reading that. It's not every day that Ryou acts psychotic. |
RedundantRedundancy chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 That made absolutely no sense. I loved it. |
Shantih chapter 1 . 5/21/2010 They ARE wildly OOC, and I LOVE it. Good lord, if only the original series had been more like this. In all honesty, I think you should go kidnap Kazuki Takahashi and hold him in an undisclosed location until he lets you write season 6. I'll help. D This entire story was made of w1n, but I have to say my favourite part had to be Yugi's little soliloquy on Pegsy. "His empty eye socket is 'unbecoming'." LMFAO. So classy. I have to ask, did you do anything special to get this good at writing? Drink potion? Take a class? Sell your soul to Mai? o.O I must know! XD Gah, sorry I keep spamming your inbox with reviews. Must curb enthusiasm. (I tend to be a very enthusiastic person). Anyway, good luck with your finals and such! Don't let the man get you down! |
Ceilo chapter 1 . 1/23/2010 OOC Ryou is the best kind of ryou there is. I hate it when people make him a little wimp. This is great. |
pipecleanerFlowers chapter 1 . 1/14/2009 lol tat was hilariously random i mean wtf? ryou jumped out of a window? impossible! yay for randomness i liked the way you made them interact with eachother, despite being a bit ooc |
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 12/5/2008 I'm actually a tad bit confused. Ryou's more sadistic than normal; Bakura has a broken nose. Hehe, Yugi is pompous... HAHAHA! This was good, and just because of the title, I *had* to read it. "A Modest Proposal;" did you know the original story is a crack-suggestion to eat homeless babies to both lower the population and conserve food resources? Gotta love British Literature. ~ Umbrae Calamitas Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream. |
Determined chapter 1 . 8/28/2008 ROTFLMAO! ryou jumps outta a window for freaking ring, man was he deseprate...who wouldn't be though, for Bakura. XD(drool) |
Neonn chapter 1 . 8/11/2008 Wow. Just, wow. I actually liked the characterization-it was a refreshing change from how they normally are portrayed, but still true. Great work, hilarious, you have real talent! |
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 11/17/2007 OK... excuse me while I say... WTF? That was so.. random! And weird! O.o I mean, you've got some great descriptions in there and funny dialogue between Ryou and Bakura but WHY has Ryou gone insane and WHY did Bakura chew his ears? I mean, it's smexy when he nibbles them (yaoi 3) but CHEWING? And btw, what exactly does OOC mean? Sorry, I've seen it on a bunch of fics and I'm beginning to wonder.. No offense meant to the actual story which was well written, but I TOTALLY DON'T GET THE STORYLINE. Good work tho! ] |
Flinched chapter 1 . 9/30/2007 I will now treasure my ears for life. I enjoyed it though! Very well written, there's no 'I'm-so-mopey-I-think-I'm-gonna-cry' Ryou in sight! I think you made Ryou delightfully rebellious, and I love a rebellious Ryou! And of course, Yami Bakura just had to be stark raving mad, or it just wouldn't have worked! But still. The ears. Ouch. I was actually clutching my ears reading this. But. That's good... I think. Uh. Yeah. I'm adding this to my favourites! |
Leopardus Pardalis chapter 1 . 8/23/2007 Don't have the time to write a long reveiw, but I wanted to let you know I loved it. |
OxygenForLosers chapter 1 . 4/16/2007 ...you know, claim them to be out of character all you want, but I found the characterization in this refreshing. It's nice to see the banter, the different possibilities in this relationship rather than Ryou crying everywhere and Bakura beating him up. Kudos. |
wallsmex chapter 1 . 3/13/2007 I can't stand it anymore, I'll have to read and fav all your stories. You are just brilliant. And I loved them in this. Actually, I don't think they were THAT out of character - the personalities you gave them, I can actually see that working O_o not so much Ryou, maybe, but gah. *FAV* |
Yami hitokiri chapter 1 . 3/13/2007 I like this because Ryou is so freaking wild and crazy and is totally wearing the pants in this relationship. THey are quorky and I love them. ALthough... chewing his ears off was a little disturbing for me. You ended very nicely as well. Pegasus with the empty eye socket... haha. |
Serafin chapter 1 . 1/1/2007 You know what? You are God. Your Stories always seem to have a deeper meaning. And youre not making Ryou the poor-cute-lil-uke-whos-madly-in-love-with-his-seme-and-only-wants-him-to -love-him-back. Man, Im so tired of these annoying situations, and here you go and bring so many new situations I could read over and over again. Please keep on writing and Please continue Faust, too! |