| Reviews for Bedlamite |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/14 I hope Harry gets his belongings and Hedwig back! I hope the traitors rot in hell for putting Harry in Azkaban! |
stevem1 chapter 10 . 3/27 This is a hilarious Harry Potter comedy, even if incomplete. |
dannymask chapter 10 . 3/14 i know its wrong but i'm loving this story i find it funny :-) |
Please no chapter 10 . 1/19 Don’t kill off cassie damn it |
claud chapter 10 . 11/27/2019 Will you ever finish this, it's good. |
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 11/17/2019 I fkin Love Narcissa in this lmao she's great I would of loved to have her with Harry |
Doctor11rocks chapter 6 . 8/15/2019 May I suggest that Harmione be suddenly unable to purchase or rent any more books. Ginny needs to recieve constant letters revealing her most embarassing moments. This works especially well with howlers. Cho needs to be totally rejected by Neville. (Not exactly fair to Neville, but who says he's actually doing it.) Lockhart has a secret affair revealed to all and sundry. Getting the woman, or man, on board is easy. My ideas are of course moot as this story is already finished when I post this. Anyway, good job humiliating the parties revenged upon. |
Doctor11rocks chapter 5 . 8/15/2019 I would like to know how the trio can specifically target the Weasley's property. That sort of thing can give someone a complex. When will they focus on someone else? Not that they don't deserve it. The continuing adventures, and letters, of Harry and friends are hilarious. Keep up the good work. |
Doctor11rocks chapter 4 . 8/15/2019 Sometimes revenge starts slowly. Why did Cassie head to Hogwarts anyway? Harry likely told her all sorts of stories. Probably all true too. Plus she's a rich kid. The idea of her doing what Harry and co. want probably tickles her to no end. Your use of an innocuous delivery system is brilliant. Keep the revenge coming. |
Doctor11rocks chapter 3 . 8/15/2019 Why are all light side wizards so evil? The phrase "For the greater good." has been used in history as an excuse for some of the most heinous acts perpetrated by leaders everywhere. Albus Dumbledore has used it both in canon and in fan fiction as a way to justify himself. Fudge is just a self serving politician. Your use of this time worn phrase has reached new heights with this story. I congratulate you, no sarcasm, in its creative use. Fudge, Dumbldore and co. are truly self justified in their misuse of their power. |
Doctor11rocks chapter 2 . 8/15/2019 Interesting that Draco was in with Harry and Daphne. It also seems that he disappeared at the same time they did. Just how well was Draco searched both before and after his visits? Security seems to be lax in the prison. Just an aside. Was Narcissa involved in a wet t-shirt contest? You are building an excellent mystery. |
Doctor11rocks chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 I thought Harry was rather polite. He didn't once call the lot of them the stupidest group of morons ever to walk the planet. Does the DMLE know what the word forensics means. Oh wait. I'm forgetting that magic and logic don't mix. How many of the group have to have the signature explained? This is an excellent beginning to a revenge driven fic. Especially when the I can see all and know all angle is dropped on them. Keep up the good work. |
noylj chapter 10 . 2/16/2019 Nice story. Dead like so many others |
girlsreallyreign chapter 10 . 1/3/2019 I like this story. |
Nargelz chapter 5 . 10/21/2018 Ah gotta love Neville and Harry and daphne okay all the ones who’s actually giving in to this crazy stuff makes them sound better tbh |