this is beautifully sad. I almost cried when Vegeta told Trunks that he didnt want Trunks to become him, and the Future Trunks reference was spot on!

That's an amazing story. It felt very in character, and I loved reading it. It was definitely bitter sweet.
And I find it sadly ironic that both children thought their father cared more for the other. :(

But at least they both get closure.

This is so sad but I love every bit of it! Poor trunks and. Every things are just never easy with these two

Wow. That was so emotional. And such a well thought out explanation for Vegeta's attitude towards Trunks.

This is the best explanation I had come across about why vegeta is so hard on Trunks. Beautifuly written.

LOL! XD

I love it!

This made me cry. So touching and very realistic.

Oh wow. That was really powerful. Great job. It is an often looked over fact that Vegeta raised Trunks to not be like him in any way or shape. I have read only one other fic that addresses it and this one is just really really good

I love how you portray Vegeta and Trunks it this story, especially the way Vegeta purposely pushed Trunks away for his son's benefit.

ahh very beautifully done :D

Today I googled 'Dragonball Z fanfiction', and I came across your stories on a different website. Your profile there had a link to here, and...

I'm very pleased that I do get a chance to favorite this after all, even if it is 4 years after this was posted.

That was brilliant, it made me... I don't know.

It was just that good.

This tuggs on my heart strings!

Man this was heart-wrenching. I think it hit a little close to home too. There's something to be said about feeling inadequate in the eyes of someone you've always loved, even if you didn't want to. Wonderfully written piece.

~Chica~

oh my goodness. the emotion was so raw in this fic, i seriously cried reading everything Trunks was saying to his dad...