Very, very well written! Loved it!

Eff you. Oh my god, eff you. That was fantastic and beautiful and painfully accurate and eff you because I'm sobbing hopelessly on my keyboard.

Loved every second. Please, keep writing. I ship them so hard /3

Eff you. I loved it.

Seriously you're killing me. These are lovely and beautiful and I love your take on Jessica to pieces

This is written quite well; it felt very...full. As in, the content had enough imagery to make you feel as if you've read half a novel :)

this should NOT, I repeat, NOT, be comlete.

Love it:D this is a well written, well thought out story that I think is really want happened in Canon:D

great story but man, so sad.

That was a bit heartbreaking to be honest! Loved it though.

I read this story when it was first published (almost 4 years ago...wow) At the time I love it for its eloquent writing and beautiful emotion. I read it again today (for whatever reason I'm not sure) and loved it for completely different reasons. Since reading it the first time I have also become the little school girl in love for the first time (we will be together for three years in Sept) and just the whole abstract concept of love has been captured in a mere 6000 words. I don't know how you brought voice to such a beautiful thing but it is truly wonderful.

Thank you.

Oh my goodness - this was so beautiful and so SAD. It just brought home even more how much Sam has lost:-( I really liked your Jessica - she was sweet and innocent and just perfect for Sam - I could totally see how they would fall in love with each other and I loved your depiction of the development of their relationship. Sam saying what he wanted out of life made me ACHE because he will never get that now - he will never get the normalcy he so desperately craved:-( This was excellently written and characterized. Well done - definitely a favourite.

Who cried? I did!

I actually let the tears come when he was listing what he wanted in life. Then the end. ohmygod you are brilliant.

This was wonderful and amazing and I'm officially creeping all of your stories for this couple. Wanna write more? I would basically love you for it.

That was heartbreaking and beautiful and wonderful all at once. I loved every moment of it.

I never review. But I'm reviewing. Which just goes to show that when people write awesome fanfics, the fabric of space and time itself can be altered.

Okay, sorry about that, I'm a bit of a drama queen. I just wanted to tell you that holy crow you're amazing. I love this fic. It was adorable, and believable, and lovable. I've got to say, towards the end there I was having visions of white picket fences and swing sets and rocking chairs myself...but then that last bit, at the very end, was probably my favorite. Marvelously depressing. I love this portrait of pre-Supernatural Sammy. College Sam. So bravo, brava, bravissimo, I loved it. Rock on. (:

This made me cry. I would have loved to see flashbacks of Sam's relationship with Jessica because it helped shaped the person we saw in the pilot... almost as much as Dean and John helped to shape him. I think you did an amazing job of showing how their relationship slowly developed and they fell in love. How he slowly shared parts of himself with her he'd never shared with anyone before (other than family but they don't count).

How her last thought was "Sam will save me" and for months, years, he beat himself up because he couldn't save her.

That was beautiful. Everything about it. And the ending just broke my heart, but in the best way possible, if that makes any sense.

Just... beautiful.