Reviews for The Gift |
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Guest chapter 24 . 9/30/2017 aww! loved it! x3 and such a sweet ending! i loved the gift he gave Ed :3 but how the heck did Roy get there though? he couldnt walked though knee high snow for 2 days...O_o could he? maybe Riza drove him? IDK lol -ZeyTheFox- |
Guest chapter 16 . 9/30/2017 hmm...i assumed 'the gift' ment giving Ed the stone as a gift, now im starting to think its either: 1, letting Ed and Al live with him. 2, asking Ed to marry him. guess i'll see :3 -ZeyTheFox- |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/30/2017 that was my fav chapter so far xD the banter was great, and poor Al...having to pretend he didn't know them. -ZeyTheFox- |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/30/2017 i would love to actually have that as my answering machine XD -ZeyTheFox- |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/30/2017 cute so far x3 and what is Roy hiding? maybe a stone? -ZeyTheFox- |
keytomyheartmyimmortal chapter 23 . 4/10/2016 the cold never bothered me anyway standing frozen in the lights of chosen...let it go let it go |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/10/2015 this was wonderful thank you |
Dawnmoon76 chapter 11 . 8/27/2014 I'm a little confused. I thought Scar killed Winry's parents. Did Roy kill them in the 2003 anime? Are you basing it off of that? Other than my confusion your story is good. :) |
gaap237 chapter 24 . 10/7/2012 Thank you for this! It was really sweet! |
estupido chapter 24 . 5/30/2012 I.. love.. this fanfic so much.. Like.. SO MUCH! OMGGGG, WELL DONE. BRAVO. WTVR, IT'S JUST SO... OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. /I'm.. being a.. yeah X |
MissVenusVixen chapter 24 . 3/5/2012 roy should have a matching ring! they touch them together and it like does something... idk what, but you could probably think of some thing cool... |
Suezanne chapter 24 . 10/7/2011 awe that's a sweet ending |
Radon65 chapter 24 . 8/14/2011 AW... Wow, well. I was REALLY happy to finally find out - I never even thought about that as what Roy was doing, making it official. The only creepy part about that is that we're talking about Wrath here... I mean, Pride, since this is Original Anime verse. The whole element metaphor was a little cheesy, but I loved the description of the colored lights in Roy's eyes and a proposal on Christmas morning in the snow...! Damn, that would be AWESOME. And I can just imagine, when everybody wakes up and they all have a wonderful Christmas together... What a nice story. I really had fun with it, and I kind of like how it had like, two parts - the family accepting Roy, and then the gift stuff later on. It was quite good. Thank you. |
Radon65 chapter 23 . 8/14/2011 Aw, man - it's ending? I've been really enjoying this story, it'll be kind of sad to see it go. This was a very nice chapter - you've done a great job of Ed's emotions and turmoil, and although I was quite surprised when he knocked over the table, it seemed like with what was going on in his head, it made some sense. I liked Winry and Al trying to help him out, and breakfast and everything. Al at the end - he DOES know SOMETHING. I'm so curious! We finally get to find out just what's going on next chapter! |
Radon65 chapter 22 . 8/14/2011 Aw, I'm glad Riza is helping Roy! I suppose he's going to show up at the house, although how he's going to get there I'm not sure. Drive, I guess. I hope nobody yells at him too much. Good job of the segue into the Resembool scene, and Ed showing up looking all miserable... |