Loved the story but I didn't like the part when Outlaw scared Lash cuz Lash was always my favorite character. But still funny. I'm not trying to sound mean but I kind of hoped at the part when Outlaw jumped on Layla he would of ate her... TEAM VILLIAN!

GO OUTLAW! Good boy! *hugs him* By the way, the LOTR animals are -wargs-, and I certainly would not want to encounter a dog that could be ridden like one. *shudder*

Awesome!

Ha!

That was fabulous. The threats were creepy, but I had this feeling it'd be warren just being..Warren ;)

What it was was still perfect. Loved this whole piece :-D

The ending phrase was absolutely perfect as well. Had me snicker aloud. Loved it _

~Tinuel

Hehe, I like it. Never did like Lash or Gwen either.

Very nice. I like Outlaw too, now. Always refreshing to read work that is good and not Mary Sue marred. Kudos.

Cool. Though I imagined the voice to be feminine. I likes it. When Outlaw jumped out on Layla I was like "Oh, now's she (at the time I didn't know it was a he) gonna eat Layla?" A good Halloween fic, as you said.

~thestinger

That's funny. I like the end. I can see warren having a dog and theat dog being like that.

Man! What does Warren feed Outlaw anyway? Does Warren know what Outlaw's been eating? Outlaw must've had some interesting parentage.

Lovely writing style and great surprises. A bit dark, but great descriptions and plot.

this was a great story

interesting u should do a follow through

*Blink*...I want a Outlaw, too! (_~)

That was a great story for Halloween! Actually, it was a great story for any day. Good job. I totally didn't expect him to be a dog.

That was really good, even tho the ending was kinda *eep*!

LoU