I can see this so perfectly!

Kibbs a LA 1920s would be gorgeous...

This was a nice piece :-)

enjoyed this well written story,

It was perfect. I loved it!

i love kibbs x

poor jen!

This was a great read.

I love how Jen can be in it with the oh so beloved Kibbs couple, and not be bashed. [Not that I mind sometimes, it makes an interesting read.] But this is great! It made me feel all happy inside!].

I love this story. It's maybe the fifth time I've read it, and everytime I find something new to appreciate about it. Thanks for writing such a cute story, and I hope to read more Kibbs stories from you soon!

that was the best story that i have read can ypuo put more chapters in the story

Great story. I loved how you had both Gerald and Jimmy in the same story. I've never seen a story with both. Actually, I haven't seen many stories with either. Most just leave both of them out all together. Anyways, McAbby forever! I mean, I'll read pretty much any ship, but I always prefer McAbby over any other Abby or McGee ship. Just a great story. I liked how it actually seemed planned out. It seemed like you had figured out ahead of time what was going to be on each floor and everything. Yeah, so great.

-Erin

This was absolutely great!

LMAO! That was great! Loved how they played the shining on the mtac screen that things huge! Anywayz thanks for having Kate in it. Made it even better! The description was well done as well. So overall the story rocked and is definatly going into my favourites!

xxcherubaddictxx

AWESOME story-loved it!Thanks a lot,Ardin!

PS:About the adult section on NCIS Fan Fiction Archive think you must go here

p104.

and tell that you are over 18