Very interesting. I think you portrayed all the characters very well, especially Denethor. Great job!

Interesting idea! I definitely feel like you have the seedlings of three stories here. I didn't find any of the three particularly striking, but they're all sort of bristling with potential. I think that it would have been more interesting to see the conversation where the older male gives the younger his marching orders - at this point, with the exception of Denethor who gets a lot more space in the books - we really don't have a good enough grasp on them to be truly drawn into their musings.

Good job! I like how you showed the conflict facing each of the leaders and how they overcame it! Good job!

~Nari