Keep more update I like see new story

So I haven't reviewed this story in a long time, and I apologize.

Good job in characterization, but I do think Kari's amnesia kind of had a quick fix rather than a realistic waiting period. Davis's reaction was very typical of him which is perfect... I also like that you had Yolei and TK as the more practical thinkers when it came to what they should do.

I also loved Cody's referencing his grandfather. I always liked that part of his character.

Is Sakura an OC? And will Dawn be in this story?

i hope the other find a way to pokemon world found a shock that kari don't remember them

cool story please continue i love storys like this new update please

You should have Zoey and Kari compeat who gets Ash as a boyfriend SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Here are some funny ideas if you follow pachysam's suggestions:

Ash: Ner ner ner ner ner!

MetalEtemon: Metal Punch!

(he punches, but Ash dodges... causing MetalEtemon to hit a tree instead)

(the tree collapses on him)

(some Aipom laugh)

MetalEtemon: Why, you...

(Paul gets into a fight with MetalEtemon, but can't get through his armour)

MetalEtemon: You can't hurt me, loser.

Paul: Tin-plated baboon!

MetalEtemon: Hairless chimp!

(they get into a fist-fight)

Nice story.

Here's some good ideas.

1. Ash, Kari, Misty, Charizard, Dawn, and May go in a jungle and have to free it from MetalEtemon. It would be cool if they vine-swung to rescue people and Pokemon, and to see how brave they are to take on MetalEtemon who can use Dark Lighting as well as Metal Punch and Banana-Slip.

2. Mewtwo will make a guest-appearence.. maybe to help against Spiritomb, Myotismon, Piedmon, or Devimon.

3. The heroes can meet Puppetmon who plays tricks on them in a city. He can even use dolls to mess with them like he did in Digimon Season 1.

Here are quotes if you do:

Ash: Who is he? Elvis of the Jungle?

MetalEtemon: I am MetalEtemon, King of the Jungle. Let's roll!

MetalEtemon: What's going on here?

Gazimon: Charizard is bombing US!

MetalEtemon: Well bomb him BACK!

Metaletemon: Watch your step; Banana Slip!

(Ash slips on the banana peel)

Ash: You fight dirty.

MetalEtemon: My armour isn't dirty.

(when Charizard tries Flamethrower.. only to find out how tough MetalEtemon is)

MetalEtemon: Fire against my armour of Chrome-Digizoid metal.

MetalEtemon: Where's my fried banana sandwich? You know I like to eat after my nap.

Butler: Yes, sir.

(they vine-swing)

Kari: This is fun.

Ash: Yeah.

(Dawn bashes into a tree and falls, until Kari catches her)

(in his lair, Puppetmon uses dolls to make people vanish from one place to another)

(he uses a catapult to launch a rock on Jenny Doll)

Officer Jenny: Urgh!

(she collapses, holding her tummy)

Brock: Hold on, dar-!

(Puppetmon pokes the doll, knocking him over)

(Kari helps Jenny up)

Kari: Are you okay?

Jenny: Yes.

Voice: Yoo-ho! Time to play.

Ash: Who is it?

Kari: Somehow, I know that voice.

TK: Oh, no!

(strings make Ash do something silly)

TK: Puppetmon!

Puppetmon: Long time, no see. Time to play.

Ash: What are you doing?

Puppetmon: Playing.

(when Puppetmon threatens Pikachu with his hammer)

(Ash and TK grab it)

TK: You're going down.

(they punch him)

Ash: Mewtwo!

Mewtwo: It's good to see you too.

hey there! cool story you got. i hope u update soon. anyways, if u got the chance check out my story if u can.

I wonder is Kari going to fall in love with Ash Ketchum in one of those chapters that you update soon?

Because you should be doing it by now.

I'm very sure that Kari will train Riolu to have it evolve in a Lucario in the next chapter.

I hope you update soon so that Ash Ketchum will meet Dawn, Paul, and Team Galactic.

I'm pretty sure that Kari will know that Riolu senses Ash's Aura in the next chapter

This so cool! Love the pokemon Kari got from the eg

Please continue.

Please continue. Love your writing style!