| Reviews for Vampire's Lust |
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   vquinn19 chapter 6 . 8/14/2018 more |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/4/2017 Instructions were As long as Sasuke and Sakura will be together at the end! |
| Maleisha chapter 5 . 9/4/2014 AWESOOOOME |
| Laylagirl111 chapter 1 . 4/2/2014 Saweet |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/5/2014 OMG SO AWESOME! :D |
| Yuzuki476 chapter 6 . 10/4/2013 so will this story continue ? |
| Kawaiilila chapter 6 . 7/15/2013 This story was amazing! And I've also read Jitsu Baru ! It has a really good plot! And gotta love the pairing! |
| foxylove51 chapter 6 . 6/3/2013 Thank you for trying to work on fanfiction again. Congrats on your marriage and baby. I hope your life is really happy. :) |
| UchihaSyaoran1720 chapter 6 . 5/14/2013 You can do it! I believe in you! :D |
| Mate-of-Sesshy chapter 6 . 5/11/2013 congrats on ur marriage and the baby and we cant wait to see what you have to us in the new posts to come |
| merinxD chapter 6 . 5/7/2013 Hello. One of the authors I beta for just up and stopped writing, so I have a slot free. There are three different story structures available for a multi chaptered stories, each giving you reasons and steps for emotional development. It helps you plan out everything so you can see the story as a whole, and know that you won't run out of steam because it is all there. Anyway, you will probably get plenty of offers and I have just read what you already wrote, so it's understandable if you go with someone who has been reading this a lot longer. If you want to check out my work for quality purposes, I am writing an ItaSaku that is updated a couple of times a week, and a SasuSaku, along with plenty of other works. I will say that what you have is alright. I have noticed tense changes between past and present, which is usually not acceptable. Though, many people are guilty of this. As well as a few other grammatical errors. I think the characterisation is good, but there could be more descriptive to set up each scene. I would need to go through properly to find more plot holes and fragments/awkward sentences and the like. Might here from you :), otherwise, I wish you luck with your rewrite! MerinxD |
| CosenAngel chapter 6 . 5/7/2013 Hello. Glad to have you back. Congratulations on your marriage and your son. I understand your need to remake the story and plot, I feel the need to do the same things actually. Unfortunately I have no ideas at all right now but if you wish to discuss som nice vamp-plans I'll happily help. I like plan-making :D I also like vampires and if you want my help just pm me :) Warm and fuzzy hugs from an old fan. |
| XxToToXx chapter 6 . 5/7/2013 Itachi needs to Change Sakura like ASAP |
| Emos-love chapter 5 . 4/16/2013 I think I liked this chapter out of them all |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/12/2012 update please love it |
