WHY WE GOING SO FUCKING FASTTT

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

Hey great job man

That was great

Wow. Explicit.

I agree with LadyBaSingSe that it goes too fast. I really like the first part, though. Sexual tension rises and makes the speed make a little more sense. A little.

Does Aang's attraction to Katara have to be sexual? One of my favorite parts of the show is that he loves her for, well, her. Oh, well. Five years later something like this is bound to happen. No need to hide from it, I guess.

he-he-he-he-HEY!... you don't mehtion the part where they freaking GO BACK INSIDE! I mean, it starts looking like the just... ya know... right there on the ground, out in the open, then suddenly they back whever this story started. first they by the river, then he got a blanket out of nowhere, man. the rest was good, no, GREAT, though.

Before I start, I would like to say - Kataang all the way and kudos for that alone!

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It was moderately well written, but it was really rushed...

I like you.

I love you.

First kiss.

Sex.

Marriage.

All in one night?

Not probable :/

I really liked the information you put on the bottom of your story, the bits of reality in our fantasy. I love a good lemon, they make feel are warm inside. That was quite a leap from thinking about telling someone you like them and a first real kiss to sex, especially for two inexperienced individuals. I always have to laugh when the guy supposedly makes a girl cum on the first try. lol Like that ever happens.

dude liked the story. but at the end... aang doesnt want to marry her that was just an exuse for the puss.y

Again with the smut story... Are humans ever going to change?

Honestly I thought this author could accurately describe how love should be, seeing as how much Oberon seems to admire this one. Both of your romance fics are ok, but the sex is unneccesary. It merely takes away from the full glory of your story and shows the fact that you don't want to take the time to observe the relationship between your characters.

Mr. Michael, or whoever you may be, please be the one on this sad website that can make a story worth my time to read. You have such untapped talent within you, I could nearly cry. Show me the true glory of a 'fanfiction writer' as I'm sure you can.

If you choose to read this review all the way through, allow me to pass you this one complement.

"Your stories 'Air and Water, Water and Air' and 'The Art of Love' are very good representations of the outcome of a fully bloomed love between two people. Kuddos!"

Yours truly,

-St. Aralor

Great Story. I loved it. Aang and Katara Forever.

every single word. of the 30 word was perfect I love it

perdon por la falta de gramática pero el ingles no es mi lengua nativa

This story reminds me WHY! I like M rated stuff so much! GOD JOB! _

Interesting story. I want more!

the sex scene was really akward... Like thier Dialog.. it i dont know didnt sound like them... heh... And the smelling... really... idk... good story though