Both unique and cute!

o3o hawt

That was a work of art. *standing ovation* Truely gorgeous. You have done the world a favor by writing this.

It's wierd, very : unusual, and hard to accept :"

but yet well written

Heh i could totally see this happening

Interesting. This is a rather brave write, and that is always something I appreciate. The whole marriage dinner was a fun concept. I'll add this to my favorites, yes, thanks. :D

Loving Ino-Shika-Chou the only really acceptable option for any of them are the others

Your writing is so varied and poignant. Beautiful. Well done

Wow. *gives standing ovation* Fantastic. This was, wow. Awesome! Thanks for writing!

lol...just lol... but i love it!

For some crazy reason, I really loved this story. It was funny, enjoyable, a complete joy to read, like I couldn't stop. And though it was told mostly through Choji's POV, I didn't feel like Ino and Shikamaru were being neglected (which happens a lot, surprisingly). Everyone got some air-time.

So yeah. ; I guess what I'm trying to say is that I had a great time reading your story, and beyond all of my expectations, I loved it. Thanks for the brilliant read. :D

-3VAD

Odd, could sworn I'd reviewed this. As a one-shot, this is great. I love how Ino went all octopus on Chouji, very cute. I'd love to see what the boys would do to her ex-boyfriend. This has a lot of potential to be more than a one-shot, maybe a series of them? There should one with the wedding, have to have that. Hope you decide to do something else with this, there's a lot of people rooting for more.

Cute. And surprisingly it had a low (good) humor.

Huh. That was... different. But fun, too.

The only part that struck me as being odd was Chouji wincing over finding himself attracted to Ino. Personally, I think that's something Chouji and pretty much everyone else in their class should've owned up to by the time they were 12 or so. I can only think of one time when Ino wasn't ridiculously attractive, and that was only because she was too young to really be aware of it (and thus failed to flaunt it). And really, if Ino had a problem with Chouji being attracted to her, it would've been easy to fix. She'd just need to stop with all the touching.

Anyway, Ino's chest IS ample, so no point in wincing over facts set in stone, says I. Especially not when they're really enjoyable ones.

Oh, and extra points for Chouji making the first move, Shikamaru being clueless, and Ino not thinking about Sasuke. That never happens enough in fanfic, though it really should.

Oh ma gawd...this was so friggin' cute and I will be the first to admit that the idea of a Chouji fic bothered me, but if they are like this then sign me up. You know it just works right between these three and I don't think it would work that well with anyone else. Well anyway, I'm glad I discovered this little gem. Thanks for the story.

cyne

that was great!