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Well it's now 2017I really enjoyed your story even if it is unfinished I feel like last chapter was almost an ending and an opening into something new. Read your biosaw you are in South Korea! Wow that's amazing! Are you from the United States or how did this happen lol. I saw you haven't logged in for a super long time. I'm hoping one day you'll open and see this story from almost ten years agosee that people are still enjoying it. I hope you are alivewell. Best wisheshope to see you make a come back in here. Best wishes..

Nice story.

I love Vegeta and Bulma, and I love your stories; I will read them through to the end. However; I do find Vegeta to be a tide bit sappier and more emotional than he should be. Too much bonding and sentimental issues... And, for the first time, I am beginning to dislike Bulma a little in these stories. Their characterizations are very realistic for your stories; they really move me, and I can feel the realistic progression of the story. However, the characterizations are realistic for YOUR story; I feel they have shifted slightly from their character according to Akira Toriyama (I hope I spelled his name right). Bulma for me, while she is intelligent, vain, loud, and very fashionable, she is also funny and like one of the guys. She makes stupid decisions and gets into danger always wanting to be where the action is with the Z-warriors. Heck, Yajirobe couldn't get her to take her infant child home and stay away from the area where the guys were fighting the androids because she just wanted to see them and be around the action. She almost gets all 3 of them killed as her plane is shot down, and Vegeta would have let it all happen! First and foremost, Vegeta is a Saiyan obsessed with defeating Goku, being stronger than him, or at least measuring up to Goku completely. His fixation is with Goku. I believe, as Vegeta began to soften over much, much time, he began to care for his family and eventually love them. He indeed suppress his caring feelings for them that he truly had, but this thing with Bulma where he is trying desperately to hide this undying love or fixation he has with Bulma to the point that it consumes him often and distracts him from his training, attempt at Super Saiyan, and surpassing Goku is a major character shift for him in my opinion. And, I feel that kick to Bulma is kind of missing. She is a little too girly, emotional, and just...normal... She loved Vegeta, and I am certain wanted more out of him as a partner/husband, but she went on with her life! She kept it kicking and loved it! She is Bulma! A sexy "one of the guys" chick! She is hilarious, and all of this made me LOVE Bulma and love Vegeta for her. She is extremely sensitive and whiny in your characterization. She almost makes me want to throw up sometimes, her and Vegeta! I know we all want to have more of Vegeta and Bulma's relationship on display, I know I do, and am excited to read stories about them. But when their character changes because people want this major, dramatic, consuming and undying love power to exist and play out between them, it can become too much, and I loose a little of the reason I loved them in the first place.

You are a truly gifted story teller and in your world of Vegeta and Bulma, which is generally true to their character, I can truly appreciate your story and be more than satisfied. I love how I can get lost in what feels like a real world with your stories, I can't truly put into words just how much I love your ability to pump so much life into characters and their surrounding stories. But, I only wish you would use your gifted ability to breath life into their original characterizations. I know you are revealing other sides to them, but these other sides seem to have changed them and made them too different for my taste. I hope you are o.k. with me saying this...its just how I feel. I guess I feel like this is a request to you since I haven't yet found anyone else who could fulfill this desired request like you.

This was soooo good pls continue ... These stories make me smile to think you guys are so talented on here pls keep up the work your doing the universe a service in a strange way!pls

No words can describe this story... I am so amazed of the writing, the character formations and even the time synchronizing. Please, I know it may take a long time and may lose inspiration, please finish this piece... I love it so much. Vegeta and bulma are my absolute romantic couple.

Thanks,
anonymous reader ;)

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One of the best V&B stories I have read that totally kept them in character

When my husband and I first started dating, he used to smoke. When we found out we were gonna be parents, I told him I wanted him to quit. Also, I just recently found out I'm allergic to cigarette smoke.

Anyway, I kinda noticed it's been a few years since your last update. I hope you post a new chapter soon. I wanna find out what happens next. :D

That must be the stupidest thing a person has done when he/she was in a bad mood. What the hell? Do you honestly think someone would be stupid enough to block an intersection like that? The whole time I was thinking, 'this is just some lamo writer who has a hard time writing personalities so has to overdo it', your character (that SO was not Bulma) deserved whatever she got from the baldy.

Not cool.

i really liked this story and i was wondering are you going to continue it. i would love to read more of it.

what a great way to reveal you're pregnant - vomit on the dad. :p

My gawd Vegeta talks to himself alot...!

Haha he must get lonely sometimes...

The story seems pretty good :)

I wonder how this will end.

Good job! _

My gawd Vegeta talks to himself alot...!

Haha he must get lonely sometimes...

The story seems pretty good :)

I wonder how this will end.

Good job! _

That was a good chappie.

Alot of dialogue. Yeah, ya did make Bulma alot younger then shes supposed too. And i think u made Yamcha alot more stupid then he was supposed too. But o well! Up too u!

I cant really say much about how the story is, its only the 1st chappie and all i've read is dialogue. But it sounds like a good read.