I really like this fic it was so cute when Seth cover Franz and Amelia Love when Eirika warning him about Innes xD

hey nice fic!

i love the mood of it- the situation and all, and the inclusion of Franz and Amelia is a nice touch

characters are very well written! good job!

I really liked this story. I especially enjoyed the lack of melodrama. It was wonderful to read a story where the relationship is resolved with laughter rather than sobbing or long drawn-out speeches. The dialogue was really down to earth and that was a real highlight of the story. It was also nice to see Eirika being forceful; it’s a part of her personality that I don’t see often enough in one-shots and your depiction of her was great especially the part about "Bear in mind that if the next word out of your mouth is Innes..." That put a grin on my face. I also enjoyed how natural things seem between them once they finally accept their feelings and the description of their first kiss– lovely.

Great story- a pleasure to read!

This was a really well-written and very thoughtful piece. I really enjoyed reading it! The love between Seth and Eirika was subtle and more on the understated side, which I found a very, very refreshing change of pace. You had the voices of the characters down very well! Great job!

I love the tone and style of the piece, I can clearly imagine this happenning. Fave!

Hooray, loved this story! FranzxAmelia are so cute!

YAY! beatiful! I love the bit where Franz is watching them go. so sweet and Franz and Amelia FOrever! _

OMG IT WAS ADORABLE!

Aw, how cute!

Lovely. You painted a wonderful picture in my head of the scenes, and your story flows very nicely. The Franz/Amelia parts were sweet. Eirika/Seth was nice too, except Seth seemed to change his mind a bit abruptly. I think it would take more to convince him, but it didn't deter from the story much. Very nice work. :)

~Lemurian-Girl~

I'm still not really sure whether I like Seth or Innes with Eirika better. I believe I'd like SethxEirika more if Seth was a better paladin in the game. Granted, he's MUCH better than Marcus, but he's still lacking. Innes doesn't have it quite as bad.

Anyway, cool story. You even managed to include FranzxAmelia, THE best couple in the game (since Amelia PWNS). I enjoyed reading it.

Later,

Rex

Nice, I liked it, great pairings lol.

I really liked this story, not least because it held one of my favourites pairings within.

I LOVED your descriptions of Franz and Amelia - they were extremely fitting to their personalities and situations that they've been in. The idea that Franz would stand up to the General for her sake was also a nice touch.

Now, as for the Eirika/Seth dynamic, it's good and standard, but it just seems that he changed his mind a little too quickly, given his musings at the start of the story. Nothing major, but it's there.

Otherwise, I see no glaring grammatical errors, so, good job! Keep up the good work.