If it were canon compliant,
I wonder what would she say about being Albus' 'man' through and through and the way he named his first child or how he met his parents' and the way they encouraging him before walking to his death etc etc and it'd probably end with she regretting not using every precaution not to get preggers.

Oh...MY GOD! That was so beautiful, I have tears in my eyes!

Oh, I just *love* how at the moment of death, instead of Lily's life flashing before her eyes, it is Harry's life that does. That is just brilliant!

What a concept. I like that you've reworked seeing your past at the moment of death into seeing your son's future. I thought it was very original and I enjoyed reading this story.

Never stop writing.

-bella

wow. that was an absolutely touching and wonderful story!

Wow... Excellent oneshot. A great feeling comes from it.

-Static-

aw! *tear* that was great! i never pictured lily seeing all those things. well, i never really dwelled on the night lily and james died, though i'm sure it's important.

i loved how you put the HHr thing in it! _

it was a bit depressing, but very enlightening anyway!

Oh, wow... That was so beautifully, tragically sad... I'm sitting in class reading it, and then I reach the end, trying hold back all the tears that are filling my eyes! Gah! Aw, it was so beautiful!

Wonderful story! _ Angsty sweetness.

Interesting, I liked it.

If you have the time, check out my own HP fic "An Arranged Marriage" )

Wonderful, as always, and heartwrenching to boot. It was, however, excellent and very moving. I love how Lily's final thought is that her death is worth it, very touching. I loved it, and of course I adored the HHr you worked in. Keep up the good work!

Cheers,

Madm_05

Aww, I'm blushing :-) I'm surprised that you managed to rework this so quickly. I believe you've broken the record among the authors I have beta read for.

As I said before, this story is depressing enough to make me like it. It has this sort of tragic finality that I try to attain in my own work. I noticed two or three tiny inattention errors, but nothing serious.

One of the things that set this story apart from others I have read about the night of Halloween 1981 is that here, Lily hasn't lost the fiery temper we've seen in OotP, and then there's also the non-clichéd ending where Harry's future (and not her own past) flashes before her eyes. I particularly like that you included the HHr pairing in this, if for no other reason than to continue the family tradition - established by James - of falling in love with a Muggle-born.

Like i sed 2 stories before that are this good, i dont kno one no 1's reveiwed it, it was GREAT, i loved the part were lily see's harry growing old an gettin with Hermione, i love this so much plz tell me if u right another 1, vik X.