I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story and would absolutely love if you’d consider writing and continuing it again. I’ve never been a fan of CloudSephiroth shipping, but I couldn’t stop reading what you had wrote. I laughed so incredibly hard at some parts (mostly Zack’s annoying and perverted ways, lol :Dand sat at the edge of my seat with anticipation multiple times while reading. You really have a knack for describing emotions and scenes to readers and keeping things entertaining. I would love to know where you were going with the storyline, it’s going to drive me crazy forever hahaha. You built the foundation up really well for a good long one with lots of twists and turns! I will follow you just in case and cross my fingers (along with others who have said the same) and hope that you come back to this. Oh, and don’t listen to anyone else that wants to say this story isn’t a good read. They are probably just jealous they didn’t write it, lol! You are very talented!

I’ve enjoyed reading your story!

I say yes, yes, yes! I really like this story, if the writing is improved, I'll most certainly love it to bits. So yes, please rewrite!

Dumb ass story

I feel like you completely forgot the existence of Materia like Cure or Restore

Please continue this! I love this and want to see how it turns out.

I am new to this story, but it is intriguing. I'm having a hard time with
the fact that Sephiroth somehow isn't fast enough to slash at or avoid bullets,
or lack of potions and healing materia, or the use of materia as a whole.
Still, I do hope you continue this story.

Sepiroth:OH curse my virility and well endowed penis! Also my good looks,and smarts,GHHH curse you perfection!
...I just got this image in my head ok?

Please continue this fanfiction is awesome. I would love to read more chapters on it Please consider continue it. Please. xD

Omg please please please pleeeeeaasseeeee finish this fic! I've been waiting ages for it to be updated!
If you need a proof reader or some help also let me know I'd love to help with this! :D
If you do want to contact me at xxxx

Yes please update

This Sepheroth is too stupid. Not in terms of social behavior, but his analytical mind is below what it should be. You can't have him be top level for one case (i.e. piecing together Cloud's happenings) and then for everything else average (that argument with the Turk and in general all his other interactions- to out sub-par).

Yes!

Please don't give up on this story...this is so interesting and I wanna know what's gonna happen with Cloud and Seph and Zack...please...Keep writing this story please...

yeas f/ck yes please do! i volunteer as beta and a free kick in the ass so that you do that! Please please finish this! ive been suffering over this fic for like 8 years now, DO IT!