Reviews for First Kiss
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
heehhehehehe this is so perfectly fluffy and cute and i love it!
Who'sObsessed10 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Yes, it IS a bit steamy. But that's okay with me, Carth and Morii deserve a bit of steam. Wonderfully fluffy and sweet as well, I absolutely ADORE this one-shot. It's one of the few that I've gone back and read multiple times, which speaks volumes. Write on!
Neferit chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I love reading fluff - especially when it's humorous Revan/Carth fluff. During several moments I was really glad that I wasn't drinking anything, since I could have easily destroy my computer with spilled tea or coffee XD

Fantastica fic! *thumbs up!*
HanuuEshe chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Cute. ;)
GaleWrites chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
aw...

*grins*

how sweet!
Kipling Nori chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Aw, nice job. Revan and Carth fluff is always nice.

I also like seeing what other authors have named their own Revan, and Morii is a cool name. :D
Amy Larson chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Awesome! Really cute. And intense and whatnot. X3 I like that image of Revan too. 3
Lightsider chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
I love this story. Everytime I need some Carth/Revan fluff. I come back to read this story. You have a wonderful talent. Morii has got to be one of my favorite Revan's, if not my favorite. Can't wait for you to update Backup and Fires of Change.
Sheena1002 chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
It was beautiful, wonderful, funny, heart-thumping, and very fun to read. I love your writing style, it's casual and personal, and it makes the story much more engaging. I adore all things Carth-related, and I thought you did a marvelous job. I'll be reading more of your work!
Amme Moto chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
I loved it. It was funny and cute.

~Amme Moto
Kallamae chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
I really enjoyed this. I think you struck a wonderful balance between the humor and the romance. And Morii is quite the character!

The only thing I can point out is a minor grammar problem. Whenever you use direct address, it should be set off with commas.

Otherwise, this piece is great. Well done!
HoratiosBabyMama chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
This was awesomely cute!and cutely awesome. In other words great story.
greengrass1914 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
Well, I like a little mush. ;)