This is the best!
it's not overly angsty but still manage to be emotional in certain places!

I loved it but it was a bit frustrating reading it when kaoru uses "you" to refer to himself when he should use I and my.

actually the host club had been open for two years not a few months before haruhi joined, and you are writing in the wrong person you should replace every you in this story with I and my to in order for it to make sense.

Well that 2nd Person Point of View kind of shocked me there LOL If ya know what I mean ;D Loved it none the less, if I was a boy, I'd be.. well.. Er... Not finishing that sentence ;;;;;;;; Loved it! 3 No critique here :3 Just a crazed fan-girl of the twincest...

Great story! I know you've written it a long time ago, but I thought I'd mention it. And I love the perspective you've written it in, too! Awesome job.

the point of view you did was interesting but it was AWESOME. wow that was good!

OMG! The best best best story ever...it is so cute. I loved the last chapter cause the lemon was very classy! haha Perfect

That was amazing!It was so so brilliant!I love the fact that it was written in this unusual Kaoru POV...And it also was cute and sweet and hot!I have one question...from all the jappanese words that you used I don't know these:Aishiteru(although i guess it means'I love you'),shikusho and wakatta...could you tell me what they mean please?

Very very sweet and very very well-written. Definitely a favorite. I loved your POV, and your characters were sweet.

Too bad Tamaki didn't make an appearance. I wanted to see how you'd write him. ;)

Thank you!

I'm utterly incoherent. This is simply too amazing for words.

You have no idea how many times I said 'aw' during this story. I found this on the hikaru/kaoru LJ community and I'm so glad it's online here so I can fave it. I love your writing. It's done so beautifully, and it makes me jealous. I wish I could write that well. Despite me writing a lot, I still don't think I'm that great, but your story has just enough description to be interesting but not boring, ad you really portrayed the characters well. I especially loved chapter one, with Kaoru just tackling Haruhi. I was laughing over that one for a while. Excellent job

AH! Write more write more write more write more! NOW!

Please?

For me? :-D

Dare I say it, kawaii.

I said it. I said it. I never spontaneously break into Japanese. But you made me do it, and you know why? Because you -rock-.

You made me read a lemon without feeling dirty, but without wondering if I was at church or something. It was beautiful and loving, and...And!

-Sigh- You're amazing. Too amazing for words. This story is going on my favorites list.

ah very good. I really loved the ending when Hikaru went to him and gave him the. Dumbass look. I think that is how it should be. So it will remain so in my mind!

you are a life saver i can not really read as i have to go to sleep...but this fic seems to be going in the direction to remedy the problem i face of Haruhi/Hikaru..which i do not like! I even thought about the jealousness that i thought should be around. well forgive myspelling and i will leave decent reviews shortly.