First chapter told me alone this would be great. Epic, in the poetic sense, for once.

I like this storytelling style, enders any narrative to me, really, and the stories themselves have that special quality that makes them very, very good, Couldn't name it at this time. Still able to happily appreciate it.

Sokka would LOVE this. I can just see him gloating over what his legend would become. :) I enjoyed this very much. And if you aren't going to finish the story, perhaps you could make a note of that in the summary?

I want to next chapter! pleasepleaseplease!

P/S. sorry for my english, i'm from Russia %)

This is terrifying, and confusing, and intriguing, and so evocative I could scream, and so far from what else of yours I've read (I've been archive-binging through your fic, at least for the fandoms I'm familiar with), and...I just hope there'll be the promised more to come.

People have said it before, but I'll repeat their sentiments because it's the only thing you can say. Wow. This story is so beautiful and almost... ethereal. It's completely astounding, really. It's so... I mean, it's just... wow. Please, if you can find the time, continue this piece of writing. It's so enchanting. I just can't stop with the adjectives. Heh.

With every one of these I feel like I'm reading a very nicely crafted fairytale...please, please update this soon!

Wow.

Who is 'Them'? And how did they capture Toph, if she's 'the girl who moved mountains'? Surely she would be able to beat up 'Them'...

Elder's great grandson? this is confuzzling...so update soon!

iMAJ ENN

I really love this story. The fairytale aspect is, for me, the best thing in the Sokka-and-Yue relationship, and I love what the story has become very, very much... with all the epic and mythical exaggerations...

Such a unique idea- and almost painful to read. Not because of the writing. Because that is amazing. Not even the content, really- though that hurts to. The worst thing is the tone. It just speaks of ages and ages gone by, and hope lost, and broken things. I've held my breath through every chapter.

O... I think I heart this! XD

Auuwwgh... that last line makes me choke up a bit. *sniffles*

*ahem* It has been two years since you posted the third installment of this series. Is it appropriate for me to demand that you finish it? Because appropriate or not, I am demanding.

Legend:The warrior.

This one is truly EPIC. What possessed you? Your mind is truly unearthly to encompass such tales!

wow. this is really, really, beautiful, with an ethereal/stylized feel to it like an actual myth or fable. excellent and touching.