...You ok? 2009 is a long time to have been gone. Well, I guess if your still cool I hope that something inspires you to come back and finish this. And if things are going bad I hope that things turn their way around for ya :)

What happened? Please come back!
Merry Christmas!

Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

Please please please! I know it's been ions but I'd love to keep reading. Your style is so smooth and clean. Your characters are even more developed than Tammy made them I swear. You have amazing detail and skill.
And this Daine Numair fic gets me all warm and fuzzy!

ugh when i started reading this i thought it was complete! its really good you should pick it up again! its never too late ;)

I'm very sad you seem to have discontinued. I've thoroughly enjoyed all your stuff, and I hope that you finish this one day!

Please, please don't abandon this story! I just finished days of obsessively reading it on my phone, to find it incomplete! You have so many people who'd love to read the end!

lol, very unsubtle indeed. lol, great story, hating how people are dying, but that is war, and i guess i like the fact that it is more realistic than some stories. great job, keep it up!

Just read all of this. Absolutely incredible. I love the story, it does appear to be abandoned but I thought I'd review anyway and let you know I appreciate what you wrote. The characterisation is incredible. Its been years since I read Tamora Pierce's novels but I have had a recent resurgence of interest in a certain awesome mage couple! Glad it led me to this story. I hope some day you finish it.

well you better update missy because it been to long

This is such a wonderful story! Honestly, I think I like it more than some of the originals (especially now that the adventures are starting!) - the characters are so well developed! I quite liked Abigail, and I hope we get to hear more about her! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! Miri, Kitten-these characters need you, Misty! This is the best tamora pierce fanfic I have ever read. Don't leave it unfinished!

Loving your story. not sure how you are going to get Ozorne into stormwing but can't wait to find out.

One minor point...

'Most of my workings are either archaic or for experimental purposes' I think you meant arcane not archaic, but then it would also need Abigail to indicate confusion as there is no way she should be able to understand the terms he uses

absolutely awesome! can't wait till the next chapter

so... I'm a new reader and hadn't realized this wasn't finished... and now it's driving me crazy, lol. Do you intend to finish it? If so, I'll hang in there and wait. If not, it was good while it lasted ;) Thanks!

Oh my goodness gracious, Numair is ADORABLE. I love how you wrote in that kind gesture of this without making it sappy or overtly lovestruck. It is so refreshing to read a story where things develop naturally instead of rushed through in the hopes of additional smut rather than quality. I must admit, this style of a real story is one that I infinitely prefer, and I must commend you on a fabulous job so far. I look forward to reading more of it!