had an eminiem moment...would have set that house on fire after i got that painting...but that is soo only me...
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No offense, but...WHAT?

So he like just slept with that other girl, Kagome goes and interrupts them, he wakes up stark naked with the other girl still there, and tells KAGOME not to leave him? He kisses her and it's all better?

I just don't get a sense that this one-shot flows well. It's like the whole first part of the one-shot contradicts the ending. Kagome seemed really angry and like she was ready to let go of him, I mean, he was the one who left her - but then she goes running back to him at the very end with little hesitation! It doesn't make any sense to me. And if he still loved her and didn't want her to leave, why would he even leave her for so long anyway.

Sorry, sorry, I'm just a bit of a feminist, and am all for strong women, and added to that I thought this one shot was completely confusing. Ah well. This was just my opinion ) At least Kag/Inu are together in the end.

I don't really get this story o.o i've read it three times...would you mind explaining what's happening to me? lol D:

i would have never thought that it will end with a happy end. i nearly started crying.

This is a great fic! I like it alot... keep writing!

wow...

that was absolutely beautiful. Dang.

This story was really sad, but then, I'm glad that it's a "happy ending." Though I was a bit confused from a couple things.

Anyways, I was all bored, wanting to read a story that would entertain me, and I clicked yours. (i know this isn't a new story. i found it on a favorites of someone else's profile)

And dang did your story catch my attention. I was really into it, and it was amazing. There's little dialogue, but you made it work so well and it's just amazing! I guess having so little dialogue really makes the story more powerful, too.

This was amazing and breathtaking! :D great job, dang.

Ah I thought this was really sweet. I think the whole thing makes perfect sense! It's a beautiful short story, with lots of passion. I liked it.

Wow... That is VERY good.

Very artistic

some people dont understand artistic things, but this was defidently a master piece, i loved it.

i've never read anything more amazing in my life, this one really captured me, i even cried! i love it

ee! that story was so good! awsome! can't wait to read your other stories!

kinda confusing... but what the heck, who am i to judje?

Amazing...just amazing.

I like it. it's so sorrowful.

Heh. It made no sense, but this story appealed to me as one of those one shots that really aren't fanfics, but short stories that you borrowed someone else's names for. I've read better (sorry) but that was very good. And yeah, the kid part was a little bit corny.

this is a great story though i really think she should dump him. i mean how could they BOTH just say "i love you", especially Inuyasha when there's a naked woman who he's f*cked for a while right in front of them? but all in all good story, very detailed descriptions.

Ja Ne! :D :)

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