Oh. My. GAWD! How could you just end it there? Seriously? Talk about ending on a cliffhanger. But this isn’t just a cliffy. You just let us all drop off the cliff to our deaths. I’m dead. I plunged into the bottomless chasm of angst, unrequited love, and unsatisfied passion of your story.

I hope you’re happy.

And I hope you write more.

Good story.

Love it! Wish there was more.

tooo goooddddd... It's the kind of story that I love to read! It's simple and soft... You should do a sequel to this one...

That was cruel! Delishously so...

All a dream! I was wondering the time frame in all of this. How old is Jason at this point? I actually thought that Lois was going to find out he was Clark and still make love to him BUT SHE WOKE UP! ACK! During the whole beginning I was wondering where Richard was this whole time... Was he on assignment? Were they divorced or split up?

I don't care what you wrote in your AN. I am begging you to continue this. If even for another chapter or two. In your Valentine challenge I wasn't sure you could have improved upon the first chapter my adding a second but I am so glad you did and I read it! :o)

I'm putting this on story alert and crossing my fingers anyway. Feeling how she feels and knowing what she knows, she can't stay with Richard, can she? And I'd love to see her confront Clark from this angle. This was an AWESOME reveal!

Keep writing! :o)

Wonderful!

It is REALLY hard to find a SR story that is good out here... for some reason there are more m/m stories on the net than the general louis/superman/clark fics. Oh well.

But I do hope you will continue this... it can't end like this! She now knows that Superman and Clark are one of the same... tell us more! You unique way of story telling wonderful!

And if you know where you can put me in the direction of some more fics like this, PM me please! Thanks so much for writing this!

~gokusgirl

Wow! Thanks for that! You should think about the Romance Novel industry...;) And write some more Superman and Lois stuff while you are at it..seriously. :)

I have to say that was awesome...The twist at the end was perfect. I didn't even see that one coming. You managed to keep the reader on their toes, however what a way to deflate someone :).

OMG I love it! Well written, and extremely hot. My brain needs to know what happens next...

Wow, very well done.

The world stopped.

Clark?

If you would be so kind, could you add a suggested reading order to your Jason White AU stories?

NO! how could you? that was great writing. but when she woke up from the dream and all! NOO!

ok i'm ! that rocked.

that was really good!lois sounds so cute! you rock!

Oh. My. GOD! Loved this! Must read more now!

This was a great read!