That pinky and the brain reference lol

ERMAGERSH. Okay like I seriously love what's happening and I applaud your story but mostly I just can't get over your excellent use of my two favorite mice. Never has there been a more fantastic pinky and the brain quote

I absolutely LOVED this story. At first I thought it was gonna be a lame sex filled porno with the scene between Ron and Kim in the beginning but I'm so happy to be wrong.

I also really like Bonnie's character development. It was nice and different from most fics.

I do wish there was a bit more darkness. I read "dark" in the description and hyped myself for the worst. Don't get me wrong! This story was great and I wouldn't want it changed! I just need an evil evil kigo story.

Love, love, LOVE the varied references! DAMN, but you write well!

Fuck. I could never pack so much story into sub 40k words.

Write on, my friend. Write on.

Don't worry, I finished the story.

Just to change the pace up, all I have to say is...good job.

Yeah, that's all you get. Don't be greedy.

Signed, infinity.

Guess I was wrong about Shego not having any objections.

Damn. That this is so much darker (and better) than canon KP, which granted was just for kids... but hell.
Ron's little confession about being in love with KP was sad. Shego leaving the room so Ron can have sex with Kim while she's like half comatose was pragmatic and probably the right call even if it was somewhat distasteful and dirty-feeling. Complicated relationship and sex issues, I love it.

The only thing I DONT get is why Shego is suddenly being taken into the confidence of the KP crew seemingly out of the blue... they are trusting her with a hell of a lot of info and they don't even know her. It's also a bit mysterious how Shego is all of a sudden knee deep in helping Kim in her current crisis even though she didn't even know her. though I gess that can be sorta explained away by Shego having a sudden protective streak of the beautiful, talented and more than a little fond for her redhead.
Still it's a lot more ... I guess generous than a lot of other Shego's I've read. Not a bad thing though she's believable to me and I like this Shego a lot so far.

Great stuff. Love it. :)

Damn. Well sex as a coping mechanism isn't great so good for Shego, being all moral and upright and stuff. Keeping it in her pants because it wasn't what was needed. Good job Shegs!
And poor kimmy. She's seriously messed up if she has been using sex to deal with her demons. Quite rough. Funny enough Shego denying her and letting her cry means that they will be able to have a deeper sort of relationship.

Loved the girls' brawl. I guess there was some sort of instant connection thing there huh? A little but of respect for each other's skill and somehow hit it off when faced with a common foe. Very cute. Can't wait to see where this is going.

Wade playing matchmaker; I didn't expect that. a Dark!Kim is a neat idea I like it. I'm always up for more grittiness in my heroes. I'm a little clueless where this story is going but I like it. Nice AU. Good job.

That's was a pretty damn exciting story. The Mexican stand off scene near the end was wonderfully executed, and did not offend my freedum loving sensibilities.

It's interesting to me how the impromptu grenade concept proved to be ahead of its time, as a certain weapons board popularized the glocknade meme about half a decade after this story's been posted.

Again, thrilling series. Can't wait to dive into the next one.

It was really awesome your story! i don't think anyone can dislike it, don't worry :D and it's really well written but sometimes it gets confusing with the different planes of time. I mean, it's cool but maybe a time reference would help it? Keep writing, you're awesome!

Loved everything about this fic. You write action very well

Every once in a great while, one gets lucky enough to stumble across a true gem of a story.

I would say this one is an emerald. 8D