Reviews for Fire and Sand
Anonymous Person chapter 100 . 8/1/2018
By far the only thing I don't agree with is how you think Chouji will be forgotten for the most part. By now, any member of the Konoha 12 has got to be a living legend and Chouji is definitely part of the Konoha 12.
Anonymous Person chapter 70 . 8/1/2018
Nah, I think that's cause Naruto's had psuedo-parental figures who were guys and definitely pervs. Cough,JiraiyaandKakashi,cough
Anonymous Person chapter 51 . 8/1/2018
Considering just how often Shikamaru complains about things being too troublesome I just can't really picture him being an academy teacher.
Anonymous Person chapter 13 . 8/1/2018
Kakashi... you are terrible.
Thedevilsangel chapter 100 . 9/24/2015
I literally just howled like a dog and now I am whimpering like a puppy. This selection of short pieces discribing these twos lives was the saddest thing I have ever read. I am going to stop typing so I can break down into tears. These be my o WHY!? I'M GOING TO BE SAD NOW!WHY?!
There is a single tear yearning to be released from my eye every time I blink it tries to escape me. This single drop of salty water that has managed to escape rolls down my cheek leaves a warm streak on my face. Then it becomes cold like the darkness within my heart, I have no soul only a void in which can never be filled. But, yet I manage to feel emotion because yet, I am sadly only still human. I strive to find something otr someone to live for, I have yet to find my purpose. I lay awake at night ponders ng if people will grieve my death, if they will miss me, if they will remember me? I will never know the answers to my questions because if I were to die how would I be able to see my family and friends? How can I know what is to happen before it happens, and when I will never be able to know when it eventually comes to be? These are things that a thirteen year old middle school girl like myself racks her brain for answers to. Life isn't meant to be waisted on things such as these, it is short and unjust and can come to an abrupt stop at anytime. That is why life is meant to be lived and every moment is meant to be cherished as if it was the last. Life can't be simply waisted, because we will all fade away, in death and slowly from memory throughout history. When I eventually die I won't simply die I will be leaving behind my legacy for others to admire and never forget. Because the dead are not truely dead until they are forgotten
That's some pretty deep ass writing for a teenager who sucks at writing and barely shows emotion.I am breaking down now Good bye or rather its a sad good bye, why would anyone be happy about leaving someone or something they care for forever?
Madame Red Wolf chapter 100 . 8/13/2014
Oh my lord. This was so beautiful! I cannot even explain how much I loved this! You are a fanomonal writer.
Madame Red Wolf chapter 22 . 8/12/2014
hah I laughed. that was sooo cute!
Madame Red Wolf chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
Beautiful.
PricklyCacti chapter 100 . 8/19/2013
I am happy to let you know your story has driven me to sad and happy tears!
I loved your collection and hope that is stays up for a long long long time!
iChelleable chapter 100 . 7/16/2013
my heart is breaking
Greatstory chapter 100 . 5/30/2013
No plot, but it does not matter. Loved it. I tend to think of myself as a hard critic but this was beautiful.
Warrior of Aces chapter 100 . 11/25/2012
This... is right.
Hayappon chapter 100 . 8/9/2012
I can honestly say I cried a bit at the last drabble ... /:
forbiddenstars chapter 100 . 7/24/2012
Lovely. I especially like the line, "And the time of demons, of Uchiha and Hyuuga, of Hatake and Inuzuka, came to an end." Because it would be true. With the end of Naruto and Gaara, a whole era defined by demons comes to an end. Wonderfully epic sounding and good.
Dancing Roses and Sunny Rain chapter 100 . 5/8/2012
WOw... just wow.
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