Yes, Light entirely deserves to experience the last moments of all the people he killed. But most of all he needs to see those who were innocent.

Yes, how many innocents did Light kill? Good job.

Amazing story! Confusing, at first, but then it all cleared. So, Light has to experience all those deaths... He's gonna die a lot of times. Anyway, very well written, with short, but meaningful sentences.

In one word, I would describe this fic as "wonderful!" It's a totally possible conclusion - and Ryuk's position in this was great! :D There are a few spots where there aren't any quotation marks where there should be, but other than that, I'd give this fic a very high rank. :) Keep up the great work! (Also, I liked how Light took a while to figure things out - take that, Light!)

You get a whole tree of virtual apples and your story was fav'd! :D

Fantastic. I love your style, the way you described the nothingness and each death was brilliant. Especially the one where Kira manipulated the man

I really enjoyed reading this! The way you described each death and made every one of them different and add to the story, especially, was very well-done.

I like the style this is written in, too, and how Light can't feel or see or even move anything at all and he's completely numb, except for when he's experiencing the deaths. Very cool. Wonderful job!

Sincerely,

Acey

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an eternity of death...sounds like hell to me.

O very very cool! Slightly freaky, but very, very neat! well done! :D

...Whoa. That was utterly awesome. The entire thing. I absolutely love your theory on the after-death Note owner, it makes total sense. And everything was so vividly described, it really painted the picture. You even described -nothingness- well, that's definitely gotta count for something, lol.

The last "killing" was absolutely wonderful, it showed that Light did make mistakes, because if he was punishing people that weren't convicted, you know there had to be some that didn't actually commit the crimes they were accused of. So I'm really, really glad you thought of that and put it in there like you did.

This entire thing was wonderful, and I shall now sit here in shock.

o! This was a good story, I liked the style you wrote it in. I wish you would continue this fic! I'm curious as to what would happen AFTER he experienced everyone's death...

Awesome. Just... awesome.