| Reviews for Redemption |
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   Raven J. Haile chapter 31 . 2/24/2017 This was wonderful. I do so wish there had been more. :3 |
| Pharmacy Student chapter 4 . 7/11/2016 Fun facts: Aspirin comes from the willow bark. Ibuprofen was derived while trying to find a safer alternative. Other herbal painkillers are opium poppy, crushed red chili pepper that will release capsicin, tumeric applied topically for anti-inflammatory effect and many more are out there. I hope this helps you with your future stories. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/11/2014 I laughed out loud when Sokka said he didn't care about Zuko HAHAHAHA |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013 Left |
| storyoftheunknownfangirl chapter 31 . 6/11/2013 Read this in a day: fabulous job! |
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/23/2013 loved this story wish i had someone as sweet as zuko |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 10 . 1/5/2013 I have noticed grammar errors in a couple of your chapters e.g. a missing word or a word spelt in the inccorect way (lie instead of lye etc) so that's the only cronstructive critism i have to offer... Great job! |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 9 . 1/5/2013 Hilarious. I like your sense of humour! |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 3 . 1/4/2013 Haha, life couldn't get any worse, could it? I like your sense of humour, Zuko! :D |
| DeletedUser0010020003000 chapter 2 . 1/4/2013 Nice. :) |
| servant123 chapter 13 . 9/20/2012 Sweet :) |
| servant123 chapter 12 . 9/20/2012 Hmm... and there's a new twist to the tale... |
| servant123 chapter 10 . 9/20/2012 I think the time-skips seem a little over stretched. I think they'd read better if you either cut them back, left a vaguer idea of how much time had passed, or gave it more of an explanation (ex- "They watched the clouds as the final hour before dawn passed by, neither having any want for sleep left in them, and each lost in their own thoughts as the long minutes ticked by." This would give a better flow, rather than saying "such-and-such-and-such happened, and-redirecting attention back up-it actually stretched for hours.) Otherwise, really nice job. I'll be looking forward to the rest :) :) God bless *heart* |
| servant123 chapter 9 . 9/20/2012 Hehe. I like this :) I love the "what if" scene, and how in the end the irritation between the Water Tribe siblings had dissolved away; very nice work. Keep up the great writing-I'm stoked to read more! God bless :) *heart* |
| servant123 chapter 8 . 9/20/2012 Amazing :) I love how you're writing Zuko's feelings in a way that it's clear they're still in development, and mostly unacknowledged or not understood. And I absolutely LOVE how you addressed Kataang in this chapter, with Toph's blunt comments; made the scene :) Keep up the excellent work :) God bless *heart* |
