Reviews for Equal Romance :03: Unstable Distance
shthar chapter 2 . 7/8
wasn't somebody pregnant?
Adol116 chapter 6 . 2/8
Just read the story don’t know if you get the notifications for the reviews if you do how did you envision how the story end.
lol chapter 6 . 12/6/2018
Wow, okay...WHAT?! IT'S UNFINISHED?! You're kidding, right? Just...no!
...okay, since this isn't the first unfinished fanfic I've read, I can cope...but it's still mean to promise your readers that you'll finish it and then don't do it.

Nevertheless, this was a nice continuation of your series and I found it really good that you finally tackled the problem of Ron's bulimia and got him professional help. Thumbs up for this. This also added a good conflict between Kim and Ron about being separated and such. And the whole proposal-on-Vday-misunderstanding was a bit cringy (because it was a misunderstanding, again), but I understand why you put it there and it was kind of sweet, so who am I to complain?
But oh boy, I can't believe you dropped that whole pregnancy sub-plot! I mean, I know this would've been a bit complicated to integrate into the plot because Kim and Ron were supposed to go to university. But come on, then don't establish it in the first place! This had been the reason for the last major conflict in your 2nd instalment and you just ignore it in the sequel?! I had been planning on complimenting you for your well-thought-out plot and for the fact that you actually plan a story before starting to write it, but now I'm not so sure anymore.

Well, anyway...I wanted to sincerely thank you for your work and also tell you again that you are really, really talented. No matter what I said about the plot and everything else, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR! Don't forget this.

Best wishes,
lol
DRM7 chapter 6 . 4/26/2017
oh come on I dont even know if u still see the reviews or not but if u do pleaaaaaaaaaase consider finishing this story! I am just in love with it! please? oh pleaaaaaase!
Drew Drakofolis chapter 6 . 9/12/2016
Hello, Ayotte!
I just wanted to say - thank you so much for writting Equal Romance!
It is simply the best fan fiction I have ever read, period.
No other piece of fan fiction was so enjoyable from start to end, no other piece made me so attached to the characters, and no other piece was perfectly enjoyable without being familiar with the origional (that's right, I've actualy never watched KP).

I am very sad that you never finished writing this story. It could have such an amazing novel trilogy - and your first 2 pieces are pretty much novels.
It's sad that we never get to see how the story ends, what will happen to Kim and Ron in the future, as well as the unexplained pregnancy thing.

But I'm really happy that you have created this masterpiece, and even thought I will never be able to know how the story ends, I will probably be re-reading this story many times to come.

Take care.
MissKaylee chapter 1 . 7/21/2016
I like the story a lot. I'm just a little confused. In the last story it was mentioned that kim was pregnant. So what happened? Did she like miscarry or something?

Yay! Immortal rufus!
TheRealContestshippingPrincess chapter 6 . 2/3/2015
Please don't leave it here. I know you haven't updated in a couple of years but please update! It's really good tho technically Ron will be brought back to life since he has 9 lives tho I net his monkey power kicked in. Also something's been bugging me. In the story before this one Kim was positive she was pregnant. Clearly, she's not in this story but I'm just curious what happened to the whole pregnancy thing? It's just never mentioned here so I'm wondering. Lol really good story tho please update soon!
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 1/12/2014
VERY NICE
ekrekeler chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
I have the same incentive as the others reviewing your story. It hasn't had any activity for more than six years, but it really hurts that I can't keep reading. This story is NOT finished, and I hope that sometime soon it will be. I also second PiRsqrd314159, and I am wondering whether or not to explain the pregnancy sitch. It's kind of hard to avoid now that the night that Kim can't remember anything about has been mentioned. I know it's been years, but this story absolutely NEEDS to continue; it's the best one I've ever read in fan fiction.
PiRsqrd314159 chapter 6 . 4/18/2013
Hello, i have enjoyed your trilogy and wonder if you have plans to finish the third installment. Also, I wonder if you had plans to expound on the underlying stress of Kim's pregnancy in the second story. I do not find issue with your spelling as I am used to reading both authors from the UK, Australia and Canada; it's still English and if people have a problem then i believe it is theirs. Myself, I enjoy diversity and see the other spellings and words that are not generally used in America as an increase in my vocabulary.
Lena.Rella chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
Hi!
I know it's been almost four years, but I just started reading your story this year and I was wondering if you were planning on continuing it. I think it's amazing how you wrote this much and even if it does't means much coming from a random reader I wanted to congratulate you for the story :)
Sorry about my english, I'm still learning...
Hope to hear from you
Draghon chapter 6 . 12/3/2012
Just finished reading this.. epic tale. I... I just don't know what to say, this can't be the ending, it isn't obviously but it was updated last in 09 so. Not sure how I say this without it sounding like begging so here I go anyways. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS, POST SOMETHING ANYTHING PLEASE!
Kipcha chapter 6 . 9/14/2012
...You know, I have read this story numerous times, and yet I always wonder why I do in the end. I love these stories, they are beyond badical, but I always feel so empty in the end when it's not finished... Please, please, PLEASE can you just finish it? Give some sort of conclusion?
SecretPlace chapter 6 . 9/5/2012
WHAT?! It cannot be the end! I have read this story from beginning to end, for that!? I have been reading this story over and over again ever since you first posted up the firat story. It urks me every time I read it. That we will never know what happened to Kim and Ron. We can prodict Ron made it though since he has 8 lives left. But what about his Kimmy? Does his love make it? Is he still upset? Is he okay with her supposed death? Is Kim alive? What relly happened? Did Ron save her with his MMP? If she does die, can Ron give up a life to save her? I'm listing questions that are running through my mind as I write. I'm betting a whole lot of people arenasking similar queations too.
If you can't finish it, at least, let someone else. Though I prefer you to do it. I'll take anyone who is brave enough to, and is willing to. Someone who can keep it in the story line and keep um n' character, the way you did it.

ANYONE UP TO IT? ANYONE WANT TO FINISH IT? GO AHEAD. I REALLY WANT SOMEONE TOO. IF U NEED TO, BEG UM' FOR PERMISSION TO CONTINUE IT. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! EVERYONE WILL LOVE YA!

PS- If you happen to have this guys email or somthin, contact him and make um' write the ending.
( A good one) Thanks (:
Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
How is that an ending? Doesnt Ron still have like... 7 lives to go? Or is there a sequel I have not yet found lying around?
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