yes i never wanted this to end but awesome 3

me the whole story OH YES...OH NO

hmm i enjoyed this way more thn i should lmao well done

wtf why is HORO A B**** really tho best shaman king story ever

opacho- the cutest girl on earth

Awesome

This was a good story to read!
I at first was just looking for a dark Story to read. but this gave me a bit more than i thought. but i still enjoyed it thank you greatly for the read!

tri-quel?

Omg o: Happy ending..well not really for Hao but ohkayy.
PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER OMG THIS IS SO GOOD. plese continouee

I love the story so much, but I must say I was disappointed with the ending /3 still brilliant though!

aww i wanted 2 knoe wah would happen if Hao found Yoh again n i was hoping that Hao found soften up 2 Yoh, buh i guess thas wishful thinking ... i thought the story was great buh i wanted Hao 2 regret some of things he did

~*pika*~

Great stroies! )

While I like this story, there are a few factual errors I'd like to point out so they are not repeated in future stories:

First, because this is set after the SF, Joco (Chocolove) is blind. He gave up his sight after his first trip to Hell. You have him reading and using a computer (things someone who is blind cannot do).

Second, it's stated that after the final battle Faust dies of exaustion, and asks not to be brought back.

Third, I don't think you mentioned the large scar on Ren's chest from being stabbed with a spear, then revived.

Lastly, Shaman death isn't that bad so long as they can get the body to someone like Tao Jun, who can revive them.

I hope I don't come off as too harsh, as I love both of the J twins stories.

-Ghost-Toast-

aargh~! i thought yoh will never escape from hao. i hope u'll got him again soon,hao!

but...but...this is suppsed to be a haoXyoh fanfic...why araint they together?