In a real life context, this is very true. Men always go after the easy ones. Boring.

Why doesn't she save her own ass?

I really liked this. It was great because it showed how not all stories have happy endings, and that sometimes we are what stands in the way of a "happily ever after".

That was deep. I feel like I could read it several times, getting different shades of meaning.

Very intriguing, and the way you revealed each detail bit by bit kept me guessing what was happening until the very end. Very well written too, and an interesting insight into this girl too. Tragic, but good. Great job!

Well, that was a lovely, depressing story to read just before bedtime.

Sigh...

Actually, I enjoyed it. I love how it changes from "My prince will come, my prince will come" to "Forget it; he's not coming." Even from the very beginning, it's apparent that this is not a happy story. Bravo! I applaud your work!

how sad... and dark...and psychologicalishly unstable...but this is kindda cool! :)

Wow, that was kind of sad.

i like your look on the situation

it was refreshing

this is truly a beautiful work.

This story is so sad...I wish her prince charming would come and whisk her away. :( Nicely written...

very, very interesting concept. aqnd i'm sure it's true for lots of people.

Beautiful writing, again! You're a great storyteller!

Really well written and very, very sad. I'm off to get hot coco.

Inspired.

I love it.

I know people who should read it, though they wouldn't be able to see the meaning.

Great job