Reviews for Breathe
Tragon chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
How cold I hate this, it was so, so, *blubbers* good!
The Leaf 180 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
this is such a sweet love story. it made me cry
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wow. Team Seven never has the best of luck.
sixteenstories chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
So tragic, but it was a beautiful fic. The last line made me cry. :]
Krissel Himura chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
wa~ really really nice though its too short! waa~~ more rinxkakashi! hahaha!
bookfreak13 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Love it even if Rin died *cries* It was very well written _ Good job
distanceincrowdedrooms chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
so sad. Poor Rin and Kakashi. Good story.
In Darkness Is Light chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Yesterday when I read this fic, I wasn't sure if I liked it or not. There were no apparent errors with the grammar and spelling in the fic, so that obviously was pleasing but something about it didn't immediately capture me.

However, towards the end of yesterday, I was re-thinking my first impression of this fic. The last line is simple, yet it gives off (to me at least) a really powerful message. I think we could all use the line "Don't forget to breathe." once in a while and the way it fit in with your story was pretty brilliant, I must say.

I don't usually read a fic, kind of like it, and then really like it the next day but I don't know; yours has just grown on me and the last line is absolutely unforgettable. Personally, I think you've written one of the best endings I've read in a long time; then again, it may just be because I really like these simple and powerful one-liner endings that tie all the loose ends as well as leave an important message that is open to interpretation.

So, now I guess you know how I feel about this fic. I thought it was ok at first, but it's really grown on me and it's definitely going on my favourite's list.
catwin chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
This was probably the cuteest KakaRin pieces I've ever read! -Favs-
Autumn'sCherryBlossom chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
this is the best RinXKakashi story i've ever read! 10/10
CherryBlossoms38 chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
I loved it! Soo good! Great job.
Meats chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
That was an awesome story...
besaryuchild chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
that was AMAZING! it was unique, symbolic, tragic, romantic, touching, it was the perfect story. i am seriously impressed with what you did with this unusual but awesome pairing.
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
I liked it. After all, the canon version of Rin's fate is still a mystery, so I enjoyed your attempt to solve it. Nicely written, and a good read!
sneakerluvvin chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Wow. Almost had my tear fallin there. I read it over and over and it never gets old. Adding it to my faves. I love KakaRin stories!
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