Artemis is so cute sometimes.

Extremely clever, but I agree with the other reviewer who said your excellent version of Artemis' voice gave it away a bit. Very fun!

That was hard. But I get it now, it was Artemis's POV. Minx. THAT WAS REALLY FUN TO READ!

You know, I read this a while ago, and never reviewed, and for that I apologize. It is short, but tells such a story behind what has happened. Also, the twist at the end took me in, as well.

I realize it was supposed to be misleading but you appear to have Artemis's elequent way of speaking down to an art. I kind of guessed it right away. I usually don't read stories this short, but the summery intrigued me and I've got to say I was not dissapointed. It was beautiful, flowed very nicely, and gave a good, breif glimpse into the termoils Artemis and Butler would face if they ever became lovers.

In short, I loved it. Very nice work.

~Oni

Wow. Creepy. But cool at the same time...

Kind like an M. Night Shyamalan movie, being intentionally misleading in preparation for the twist. I like it.

And don't worry, (if you still are worried [not that you should be] about the confused reviewers) if you read it again with the hindsight (foresight?) that it's Atremis' POV, you can tell that it is.

Oh, wow. Didn't that just make sense. :)

i loved it! at first i thought that is was from the butlers pov

:)

well done it was very well writtern

Coolness

Uh. Sorry, didn't understand any of it. Who is in love with Butler?

At first I tough that it was Butler's POV. There were few sentences that made me believe that..Or maybe it was just my imagination..?

Anyway, I liked your story very much :) It was just so good !