Reviews for Prove the Pervert Wrong
DarkerThanYourSoul1010 chapter 7 . 7/3
Hospital Report

Patient:1010
Name:Dark
Condition:Coma
Cause:Fainting,convulsing,steamy yaoi
Culrits:Seme Minato Namikaze and Uke Naruto Namikaze aka Minanaru,Author-sama aka KyuubiMan
Amun565 chapter 2 . 6/24
confused as hell here. Shunshin is a common movement technique. Hiraishin is the yondaimes movement technique.
norahc1 chapter 4 . 6/23
actually i just rememberd their is textual evidence for shunshin shisui uchiha a man so skilled with using it in rapid succession they nick named him shisui the teleporter
norahc1 chapter 3 . 6/23
theirs no textual evidence for shu shin but theirs visual evidence every time a ninja jumps away and their body fades out of existence thats the shunshin thats why its called the body flicker they dont usually say it because it dosnt require seals
Guest 8 chapter 9 . 4/25
Naruto becomes the Hokage. Naruto destroy all the hot springs. He sneaky tells his female friends to come to his home. That has a hot tub. That’s way Jiraiya can’t peek on them.
Me chapter 7 . 4/16
mabui-chan is related to anko-kun!? ( tHATS RIGHT I SAID -KUN)
king gilgamesh chapter 9 . 12/8/2019
this was amazing at the beginning but now its just boring. Loved the ocs though.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2019
Jiraiya is an immense piece of shit to the worst degree and frankly, tsunade isn't much better for allowing him to get away with making sure no one else will train naruto either. Fuck them both.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
I liked the story before that annoying twenty year old girl or whatever showed up. Tsunade is way OOC.
Ranmaleopard chapter 9 . 1/8/2019
My god this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue
Squidgod812 chapter 9 . 12/30/2018
this is great
dbrown95 chapter 9 . 12/12/2018
You throw around genjutsu way to much, its supposed to be really really hard to learn. Why use anything else if you can make someone forget they had a lung, or just conpletely remove all of there senses entirely, or just forget how to be motivated enough to do like literally anything even in a life or death situation?
Kingkong101 chapter 8 . 11/8/2018
Lame
Zeta Grey chapter 2 . 10/22/2018
nah, it's normal to develop small (and not so small) crushes on original characters you make... I've done it a few times... (this was actually a few years ago) I decided to honor these OC's by naming my future kids the same... I'm sad they won't hook up though... good story!~ -Grey
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 3 . 1/29/2018
Ok if all these techniques and he still can’t even hold a candle to Orchimura then I might have to stop reading cause you’ll have made Orchimura far to strong. Theses attacks are absolutely devastating. That and he also has been increasing his speed and strength by a multiple of 25 or so at max. If he’s still not good enough to even attempt to fight off anyone in the series then they are too bullshit.
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