A lot of the events in this story moved a bit too fast for me, like how quickly they went from grumping at each other to being really close or the fact that a lot of the important battle scenes were only a couple paragraphs, but I thought you did a really excellent job with Katara's characterization. I loved that she suggested doing the invasion at night (that makes so much more sense) and that she was willing to use bloodbending. It always seemed really closed-minded to me that she deemed it purely evil in the show when it could have been so helpful in so many situations. Anyway, good job.

Great story I loved it!

Why doesn't Katara heal Zuko with her water bending?

I'm speechless..i mean this story,all of the chaps are totally wonderful..ZUTARA rules!

The story is coming along well, but Iroh should be calling Zuko, Prince Zuko. He doesn't stopped calling his nephew with this title until the middle of the second season I think. Just noting that. I really like this!

your dedication to this story is AMAZING

i can't believe I am just reading it now so many years after you first published it! Your story flows amazingly and though I have not seen your first version and cannot compare it to your newly revised story, I just wanna say THANK YOU for writing this :) please keep writing!

fanastic story, it was amazing all the way through but i wave to say, short chapters are short, but you make up for it by having ALOT of them:P

Zutara should have lemon in story, but that's my standard opinion so don't bother, their interaction was done great, but Sokka (&possibly Suki) should have a harder time accepting Zuko and Iroh into the group...

moar Tokka (as i said my standard opinion) it was enough but more won't outbalance the story, they had kind of an open ending if you ask me.

so i hear talk about sequel? if not i better start it bc Awsome story is Awsome!

believe me;) write moar Avatar!

succes on your next story, & let's hope it's a long Avatar story!XD

I loved it. Along the way you said how you didn't think those chapters were the best, but they were. I love Zuko and Katara! The were always my favorite pair. I loved it, and your a great writer!

Thanks for writing such a lovely story for all of us to enjoy :) Keep up the good work!

God bless

Well done! I like the sarcastic bit with Toph and her hiding back a smile :) Cute handling of the situation with Aang. I'm glad you didn't have him all depressed or anything. He bounced back like any kid his (apparent) age would do. So good job, I really like it :)

God bless!

Awww...

A happy 'Aw' for the lovely couple (So adorably written, btw)

And a sad 'Aw' for the avatar- but he'll move on- he's too light hearted (I think/hope) to cling onto the misery of heartbreak for very long.

Another well written chapter, good job :)

God bless!

Nice :)

Nice job inserting his relationship with his mother in there- it's like an 'instant attitude/likability boost'.So, yeah, well done :)

Intriguing...

why doesn't katara just heal zuko's ankle? Then she wouldn't have to listen to him complain.