Even when you did not write for some time I do hope some day you write some more - and maybe a second part to this story about yoko and rushi /dark Schneider ...maybe even babys-
Possible also maybe a meeting I'm future for there first child?

I liked this story it was interesting and fun even when some terrible things did happen...I did read over this part ...-,
Maybe some with not so much pain or bad things for the "good guys"

I love kall's housekeeper this woman is a force but real nice -
Good yoko starts to pull out of shell of sadness and hurt -

Because of the mother...mother earth? Is why yoko did loose her baby?

Really interesting story , even when there what're parts I really can't stand like what you he priest dis to kall and to yoko and other...he was terrible and I think he got of way to eask and fast bit I hope he pays for all this after...

Is yoko again pregnant? I so hope for twins...they will keep there father on his toes...-
Will she life long as her partner ? The magic users life way longer than other but he even more... I find it sad when he would lose her to time some day...

Great that kall and lily found together again and he did talk of from being lord of a land

I would love to read more of them or other story with them -

Kall was cute to give her freedom from slave mark as thanks
Yoko really got her partner to her beg and call. .. I really love this two

But ...that this bastard angelino is still alive and got magic...that his hidden place was not destroyed ...I so hope he made mistake and did leave a magic print that they can find his hide hole. ...at least he did feel a tiny bit pain already ..but not enough...

This Bastard wannabe priest and also the wannabe prophet ...raped him. ...and his bitch of a mother did not try to free him and bring him away but tried to kill him ... are they all sick? Are this two male the same who did this sick thing? I really can't stand fanatics they are sick and blind.
And that all because he wants a new body?
There is no punishment string enough to let them pay what the did to Kall and Yoko and whoever else...I so hope he goes down slow and painful and pays for what he did after with pain and feeling all he did triple he ever did to any being .

I have read this FF at least four times over the years, its still just as beautiful and inspiring. I just love it :)

I sincerley hope you write more! This storey was amazing. You have such talent!

Ok first I love this story it's one of my top 5 favorites. Second I finally finished reading it (I started reading this my senior year of HS). and Third you are an excelent writer _

A truely awesome story, one i enjoyed greatly, obviously been 10 years since you wrote this so you might noy get this review but meh, you never know :)

Hi! I wanted to tell you I read this story years ago; possibly when you were still writing it, and for some reason, I remembered bits of it last night.

I was so afraid I wouldn't be able to find it again. I'm going to reread it all and beg you not to take it down, ever. I remember thinking it was brilliant, and honestly, bravo on it! It's pretty darn epic. I recognized this chapter (random chapter I selected to check if this was the same story I read).

Thank you for writing :)

I have read this story TWICE now and I find it to be very enjoyable! You have portrayed the characters so elegantly well that one would think you worked with Kazushi Hagiwara on the manga itself. There really is nothing for me to say that you could improve upon. Even when you receive reviews in 2011, that only means that you're story is one of the 41 that are worth reading, more than once.

Congratulations on the long haul, it was worth it. )

Wowzers! That was a long, complex, and very evocative story. I am very impressed! Thank you for sharing it with me.

This is one THE best fics I have ever read. I have read it at least three times...all 68 chapters. You capture everyone so well that it would almost seem that these are your characters. Please keep writing and bravo.

-Cyndi

Just finished reading your story, and it was an amazing read. I was happy enough to have found a long story from the Bastard series, but to see one so well-written and in keeping with the style was a miraculous joy. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories, but since it's almost dawn I'll prolly grab some sleep before finishing them. Once again, thanks.