WOW! I just wanted to say that my name is Sayward too! wow, i'm shocked at this! this is just so cool! i always thought that i was the only one with that name! lol

1 Aww. I like naruto and Hinata as a couple. They are so cute together (and perfect for each other)

2 What is with Shino and Kankuro dancing together. I mean, they have only spoken half a dozen sentences to each other thoughout the entire show.

3 WTF is with the whole grinding thing. And the sharks have two penises? (at the momen I am feeling/acting like/looking like Hinata does in front of Naruto.)

I don't get how she cought him in his lie...

NNO! I was about to read what appeared to be a wonder full story, whe suddenly I read the authors note. GAUH! It sounds like such a good story, but it has yaoi! I hate yaoi! Im doomed to woner what happened in this story for all of eternity NO!

Okay first of all... write sequel soon please!

Second. That last line reminded me of Lestat from the movie Interview with a Vampire. He goes 'Louie, louie, louie. Still whining louie.' ;

yay keep up good work _

FooFooCudlyPoops ~ GAH! I HATE- um.. Dislike... Cliffhangers alot! Your story kicks $$, lol

AvatEm ~ ... I love it! *smacks Foo on the head* I said no bad words!

FooFoo ~ sorry, sheesh..

CodeWater ~ i really like it )

Omigosh! They didn't go home! They went to Akatsuki! LOL! Hell, after dragging Naruto and Sasuke with me, I would have gone to the Akatsuki hideout first thing. LOL, but again I'm weird and like Akatsuki yaoi (and orgies!XD). LOL, sorry 'bout that. Wait, DID they go home? Then why is there a person that sounds like Itachi there? *Confused* Oh wow, NOW I'm like super confused...

too laz to sign in...

XD THEY INVITED AKATSUKI!

U'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!

XD ROFLMAO! TO FUNNY!

I like your story, update soon please!

“You know,” she began, speaking to Kisame, “some sharks have two penises.” OMG, that part made crack up so much I fell out of my chair and people kept giving me strange looks. God that part was so funny I'm still giggling about it. Ahh, if I was them I would have gone up to and asked "So... who's uke?" just because I'm weird and like KisaIta. Also I would have invited Sasori and Deidara, and possibly Tobi. Hurray for this chapter! Please update soon!

This is good! :) At first I was a little nervous, thinking it was going to be about a couple of fangirl-y Mary-Sues, but it's not and I'm glad. I hope you update soon!

It's 3 o clock in the morning...I have 2 get up in 3 hrs XD dude. this rox. u keep it commiong!

I'm not a big OC fan, but this is actaully quite a nice story! It made me laugh out loud at some parts! Too bad you didn't make the boys older, it would have been better that way. But still a nice story. Please update as soon as you can. Hehe Naruto's pretty fly for a white guy (a song by offspring, god I could see him dancing to that...).

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lol. I loved this so damn much! I can't wait until you update again. I'm really surprised that you haven't gotten like a flood of great reviews, cause damn, this was funny. I swear this is like me and my friend mollie if we ever went there. But there'd be more chaos. I like this though, you need to update soon! Your friendly friend, Stavi!