Well, I definitely have to say this has been an interesting story to read. I liked the characterizations and the humor worked well. The interactions between Boyd and Nephenee were fun to read.

Also the 'death' of Sothe went well, as it felt real and I didn't see him coming back and just like Calill and Lucia, Sothe's return quite surprised me.

Have to say my favorite line was Gatrie's "I am present," "This is 'confirmation' and then his response about the problems,

Weren't you listening? I am confirmation."

Thank you for the wonderful story.

I only have one thing to say, and that's that I can't believe it took me so long. Sagita. Bow. Latin. Hit me all at once in chapter six. Good use of knowledge of language and importanr meaning behind names.

All of the character were very, truly awesome. I lol'ed particularly loud at Sothe's victory dances (okay, Sothe's parts in general) and at the part where Ike is called a superweapon by Soren. Seriously, that, right there, is epic and pure win.

...The sad thing is, I can see Soren's laugh having that effect on people.

Dark: *happily* I know. Isn't it great?

...Okay, he may be my favorite character, but you're starting to take things a little too far.

Dark: Favorite character nothing. He kicks ass. I LOVE HIM!

...And we all know how you show your affection...*shudders* May God have mercy on his soul...

Dark: I'm not that bad...

*dryly* Your favored characters usually end up near death or temporarily dead before you revive them...sometimes more than once in the same fic... How is that 'not that bad'?

Dark: ...Point for you...

*sighs* Doesn't even try to deny it... Loved your fic. One of the more interesting stories I've read in a while. Good luck on your future fics. May they be as good...

Dark: *cuddles Black Materia* Or better...

*sweatdrop*...Than this one. Ja ne!

Dark: Ja matte ne!

Really good story! Your writing style is especially striking - funny and witty and never-missing a beat. The plot wasn't lacking by any means and you killed me several times over a line with your characters.

Thank you a lot for writing it!

I must admit I was not expecting Sothe to jump out of nowhere.

“That was the single most improbable thing that has ever happened.” Such a funny line. But my favorite one by far was this:“Just sit down and take your smiting, you twisted freak!” That one had me in gales of laughter for several minutes. When Flecther called for reinforcements was also a great scene, you think the tide is turning but not for the one you would expect

Wow, that was amazing...it had BETTER all be explained...somehow...eventually...now I have to read that other fic with the singing...

Oh my gosh that was SPECTACULAR! You are an amazingly good writer! This story was both serious and hilariously funny at the same time. (I LOVED all your descriptions of Soren. . .they totally made me crack up.) And Sothe. Sothe ROCKED. I never liked him much in the game, but here I love him. Actually, heck with Sothe, I loved Gatrie and Boyd and Calill and. . .and just about everybody! You did such an excellent job! Too bad it had to end. Thank you for writing this!

After reading this entire fanfic in less than one hour, I am struck with awe, and can only type one word:

WOW.

This was written quite well!

Dude, the end was pretty conclusive, as far as I'm concerned. And the story wrapped up in a nice length/with a nice ending that wasn't cliched or too up-to-the-reader. You should write some more PoR stories! (especiallySothe/Astrid*cough*)

Oh...it's over? Well I have to say, you definetely ended this story with one hell of a chapter. I loved every second of it (oh yeah, and Sothe rocks). I'm a little disappointed that there wasn't as much Sothe/Astrid time in it, but at least it was Sothe/Astrid. I just wish that people can see the potential in this pairing (and that the relationship can be carried over into FE10). Well like I said. Good chapter and very good story. Hope to see more out of you soon.

GAZ

good ending. and you say you know GoD spoilers: how? can you read japanese or something? and if not, could you get the magebear a translation? the magebear cant continue tbam till it knows a little more about GoD. anyways, great story, good ending, write a sequel, etc.

Aww, I love the end. Appropriately epic-battle-ish and humorous, and somewhat romantic as well. And of course, the FE10 allusions make me smile.

I adore how this turned out. The entire plot felt interestingly canon-rooted from the beginning, and it ends so, with some allowances for humorous heroics, and some thief rules thrown in. I still love thief rules. X3

It feels like there is a bit more left to be said, but at the same time, it feels concluded very tidily. It's like, hmm. It's like it's written for a series. It is its own whole, end and all, but you know something more's going to happen to them.

You continue to amaze me with this fic. The intraction between all the characters is pure gold. The description of Mia's fascination with Orange, Gatire's verbal sparing with Hayley, Soren and his 'Neccesaryn Havoc' all witty and very funny. Describing how the Bow of Falling Stars works and to see it in action was very cool. I'd have to say my favorite part was Astrid waking up and becoming a paladin again. I LOVE stuff like that

Once again, I pour over and laugh over all the parts of this fic. *grins*