I still love this story! Thank you again so much for writing it!

I hope your health is OK and you continue this story! It's seriously amazing!

Dat cliffhanger. Still a good story though

So it's been forever. But I love the story. And Meg belongs with Herc, and Larxel is love.

I have died 13 times from laughter over the course of this story. There is literally NOTHING I have observed in my lifetime that has reduced me to such a state. Except for a few things in the Naruto Archive that came close, but not in such a way as you have done here. Seriously. WRITE MORE WOMAN.

Also: How're you feeling?

AXEL REPRODUCED.

HOLY CRAP.

I'm going to laugh so much more than I already have (a metric ton of laughter so far, incidentally) if Squirt grows legs and becomes a pyro. Seriously. And Parental!Axel is SO. HILARIOUS.

Seeing that this story has been dead for about 4 years now makes me sad. This is a great story and you shouldn't let it go to waste.

I realise that this story hasn't been updated in three years, but just on the off chance you still check reviews, I thought I'd say this.

I really, really love this story. It makes me laugh out loud every chapter, and I adore the Axel/Larxene dynamic you've got.

The only thing is that Axel's narration is sometimes a little OOC, just in the way you phrase things and choices of words, like "Oh my gosh." It's just a little thing, but it throws me off a little :)

And this is probably just me nit-picking, but sometimes the way you refer to gay people is a little offensive. Like saying Demyx 'turned gay' or 'gay people talking to their fellow females.'

But other than those little things, this is one of my favourite KH fanfics, and I hope to see it updated someday :)

Heh. I suppose the whole being dead thing would make Meg a new organization member.

But these ones come close

Hey, cool story bro.

Now that the meme is over and done with PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE, YOU HORRIBLE, WONDERFUL PERSON.

GYA!11!1 MOAR please! MOAR! I love this! I love Larxene and Axel! GAH

:) this story is brilliant. It's different, and it's unique, and normally i'm against pairings and I never liked Larxene but I like yours. :) keep up the good work and update soon.

Been a while since I read this one, and thus had trouble finding it again, having forgotten the title. Reread it again for the memories, and it did not disappoint (Though it hasn't updated in so long D:).

Though this critique is probably completely worthless given how long it's been since you've written these chapters, and an author of your skill can only have gotten better in that timeframe, the main issue I saw with the earlier chapters is that you seem to be stuck on tacking in movie quote lines in areas where they probably wouldn't flow right, though granted this was mainly in the Port Royal chapters, and I completely agree with you there, Jack is practically impossible to write for. Seemed to have fixed itself in the later chapters.

Your comedy is frankly genius at times. Seriously, I mean it. I recall skipping through some parts in my previous read through, mostly because I was at the age when I couldn't deal with a dude putting himself out there like that, and now am regretting it, as the hilarity that comes from most of this is amazing.

Other than that, there's just the spare inconsistencies to be had between chapters. Like Axel not just putting the fire on the ship out like he did Hades' hair, or the first scene of Roxas and Axel descending into Pride Rock had the computer establish there were no human women, and they seemed to have forgotten in the second one (Though granted both cases you could argue the situations kept things from popping to mind, Like Axel forgetting due to the adrenaline and both of them hitting their heads real hard respectively). Really enjoyable regardless though.

I particularly like the in depth nature you explore into these characters too, most of them being written practically perfectly. Seriously. Axel especially. Though there's a lot less fiery ass kicking than I would normally enjoy, Demyx showing up and kicking ass like that totally made up for it. XD

If you someday decide to come back to this fic and grace us with more of this genius, I certainly hope you keep up the awesome. Things are really getting interesting, what with the Roxas in his head and whatever Xemnas wants (Though after aquiring Meg I do hope you tread carefully with Axel's future flirting, as I really can't see why he would after this, and Loyalty does seem a big thing of his as you've established thus far). Granted new canon information has made a lot of things void, but I'm intrigued where you'd go with what you've established thus far regardless. I'm getting the feeling that Roxas's amesia may not have been totally what he was after in the first place, what with his notion of the Shady things Xemnas has been up do behind a lot of backs and what not as he stated in Axel's head. And I'm seriously liking the intrigue it provides.

But if this has died, I must take a brief moment of silence for a rather exceptional fic such as this' passing. Though I lament it regardless, I must say good luck to you in whatever endeavors you find more fruitful.

You leave us hanging like this? And then you don't update for two years?

Ahem. Sorry, I'm over my I'm -gong-to-die moment.

I aspire to write you the logest reiview in history, at least by my standards D

I do this my friend, for three reasons:

A. To pay you back for the hours of happiness and entertainment you provided me.

B. I want a cookie.

C. I hope to urge you to update so that I may get my aforementioned (see you're rubbiing off on me) cookie.

Albiet a majority of my reasons are somewhat-okay entirely selfish. You wouldnt' break a little girls hart would ya? :o3 (that's supposed to be puppy dog eyes, I shamelessly stole it offline)

Anyway enough with the emotional blackmail and on to praising Vixen!

You are the the Shakespeare of fanfiction.

Your words flow fantastically and they don't sound strained and if my aunt ever met you she's fall in love with you (she's a laugage teacher P )

Before I read your story I was about a 70% Axel fan. Now I want to tie him to my bed and never let him go!

I have to admit though, some of my most favourite parts are the Larxene ones, what can I say, I'm a Larxel slave.

You had me in fits of giggles one minute and the next I was all sad for Axel. Some of those Disney chicks were just plain cruel.

I really love your Demyx, as gay and mentally disturbing as he is. He is hilarious! I really like the Heart Throb too! I can totally picture it.

I love Saix! All his scenes are so delightfully sexy in this passive sexy way.

Your Xigbar was also so... Xigbar! I would never imagine him and Larxene, but in your story they go so well togrther. Though I'm glad they broke up, Axel and Larxene are meant to be together!

I adore little Squirt! Though I have to admit Ariel scared me at 's better off with us fangirls. I love how Axel bugged Flounder and the the Nemo cameo was loads of fun!

Vegan Zexion seems complelty possible. I can just see it!

Xemnas is also wonderfully demented. Hehe he'd make a fun world dominator.

Xaldin is also really sweet. Marluxia is... Marluxia.

And Roxas! How could I forget Roxas? In all the stories I've read, Roxas is like this little kid who can't do a thing. Your Roxas is psychotic and like.

Basically I love your disfunctional Organization XI

I love Axel's grace at Port Royal! I can't stand Elizabeth, she was mean to Axel -_-. William was so stupid and in character! I can't stand him in the movie! He's always Elizabeth this, Elizabeth that yada yada yada and you captured him perfectly...in a good way!

Your Auron is pretty cool too and the battle was fanstatic!

My review is not turning out as long I hoped. It's kind of hard to describe your phenommenal way with with words. I'm obviously not as skilled as you D

Just let it be know that you are an amzing author and a lovely person. I'd love to meet you someday. Me loves you *glomps* I have a feeling, afer the recent onslaught of tests is over, I shall be making a Livejournel profile so that I can talk to you more! (Excuse my stalker like tendencies)

Please send my regards to your brother and on my behalf, thank him for making you wirte this story. Also please ask him if he can beg you to update it D hehe

I hope to hear from you soon, you'll be in my prayers.

Love Saadia

“Because B Shells are too small and D Shells are too big,” Ariel responded simply.

You my friend, are a genius.