What a long happy

This is one of the most entertaining things I have ever read! It's like Shakespeare except I can understand it! All the words work out perfectly and the plot is fantastic. I'm even loving Belle and that's saying something. I hate Disney -_- but I love your version of it )

Yeah, you probably should slap me for the very late promised review. I actually started playing Kingdom Hearts II again and I thought I'd just read it after finsihing the game so I know everything inside out. But I could't resist. Your story was just too damn tempting. And I can tell you I'm not regretting it D

Okay to the story! Fanstastic. I love the way you use words! It's just so awesome and spectacular and awe-inspiring and captivating and whatever else you can find which means ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER!

*Ahem*

Sometimes I accidentally review the first chapter instead of the chapter I actually meant to review. Your whole story has been a marvelous read, not just chapter one. I hope someday you decide to continue it. _

This is good. Really good. Subtle and layered and catchy and fun. I really like it.

You made Larxene ... not... bitchy! I think I actually like her better this But then again, most of the fanfics I read are Akuroku, so that might have something to do with it. Feel better! Well, if you're still sick. I don't know, I'm sleepy and I feel like I'm talking to myself for some reason. Iunno.

-slightly random comment- Hey, my mom works at Johns Hopkins! Though you won't see her unless your brain is damaged (in the literal sense.) I hope you feel better! Your story is kind of angsty though ;

why did you stop?, i was enjoying the insanity

Ohmygoodness.

I just read this whole story, and I haven't reviewed until now, because I didn't think it was right, but I just want to put this out there. 33

The first thing I want to say is that your grammar is impeccable. Your writing style is very smooth and fluid, while not over describing/etc. I really love it. 3 And it's not always mopey, too, with those large amounts of humor in it, it just makes it adorable - not in the sense that it's cute, but. Able to be adored. Yeah. 3

Alsoalsoalso. The plot for this is very good, and I love how you've developed it and stuff. 3 Very awesome. I can't wait to read more, if you write more! 3

PLEASE PLEASE PLEAASASASASASE update? This story ROCKS. It made me laugh so hard! Update!

:D Larxel is one of my secret obsessions! Very well done!

“Aw, you’re in denial, how cute.”

I love that quote!

Awesome story, full of pure win. Can't wait for more.

I was wondering though. Shouldn't Squirt be a mer-dude? And... is he gonna be stuck in the bathtub forever or is he gonna get a human form?

Ahaha... random questions. I love Squirt, though, I really do. And this story. Very funny.

-Burgan

This was a wonderful story. It looks like it hasn't been updated for over a year, but this chapter was kind of satisfactory as an ending. It's nice to know Squirt's still alive. Little chap grew on me from the moment he was ripped from Axel's womb. ... It felt so wrong to type that just now. Great job and best wishes to you! _

Ah ha ha! The scene where Axel gave birth was priceless! "Of course it's a premie, you ripped it out of the womb." I laughed hard. Will we ever see Squirt again? And was Squirt 100% seahorse or did he have a human torso and a seahorse tail? Does he have a heart? Is he a nobody? Gah, the questions!

Ah... I can't resist pointing out something... Axel is breathing water in this chapter. He wouldn't have to swallow because swallowing would direct water to the digestive tract, which is just drinking the water. To breathe it, you wouldn't swallow, and it would go in the lungs. You know, you actually talk about a lot of speech language pathology topics in this story. You have talked about breathing, swallowing, the voice, and the larynx.