Loved it

HAHAHAHAHAHA...! FLOOD CONTROL! XD It's hilarioud! and...

a very suggestive ending there '

Hahaha well done! This was very cute, their revenge was awesome.

This was so freakin amazing and just so damn in character! I could not stop laughing

Oh My God! That was so...so...*Faints from lack of air due to EXTREMELY hard laughter and loss of blood*

HA, that's awesome XD

I especially love the last scene! And I also liked your portrayal of the twins' relationship. (Yes, I know, probably too deep thinking for a crack oneshot, but I really did like it).

Oh, also there were some mistakes, but not really noticeable or irritating, and nothing major, so I wouldn't worry too much.

That last bit, though... I can so imagine the twins doing that if they were separated like that XD

they were faking!?
oh well, fooled me.

XDD I just realized that the twins weren't *humps air* xDD I can't believe that they were only joking around xDDD

Best...ending...EVER

So sad though TT

SO DAMN CUTE ARGH ARGH ARGH ARGH ARGHHHHH!
. REVENGE IS SWEET!
wooottt
you're AWESOME to pull this off as your first fanfic!
banzaiiibanzaiii!

OMGOMGOMG. This. Was. Amazing. And is now one of my favorite Ouran fics. Thank you so much!

that was one of the cutest hikaxkao fictions i've ever read... thank you for making such a fluffy story

I thought it was a very good writing' but was looking for more of a sexual theme. Didn't get it. :( (still a satisfied reader)

This is really, really good! I love the way you did this! It's just so...kjsahfjfd! Awesome! u

HAVE A FUCKING SEX SCENE ALREADY D: