I'd be hilarious if he got with Anko. I think she would help him out if he asked. They treated her like crap after all.

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH OMG I LOVE THIS STORY CONTINUE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! ...jk but please continue its very good

awesome update soon

kinda lookin frward to read the Naruto An Avenger...

its intresting ... post the furtur chapters soon...

General Views: The Jonin Exams are held in the respective chunin's home village.

This Happens Because: The Chunin Exams are a way to flaut the strength of a villages Genin over anothers.

But would You Really, want the whole world to know how strong your Jonin are? that would invite attacks, and weakin the village, because their skill are predictable.

Appart from that fucking update already LAZY ASS!

*_*

you have a very obvious habit of adding ed and s to the ends of verbs and nouns when they aren't necessary, and you generally just screw up the tenses and stuff. Also you often call people by description and it gets pretty weird.

Get a beta!

he had woke up rather late-

he had woken up rather late

he woke up rather late

looking for any sign of fight or blood-

looking for any sign of a fight or blood

The male Uzumaki sighed

Naruto gave the fox demon

The mythical bird gave

The Sun nin

The leader

he self-proclaimed Kenshu

The female leader

eyed the single male carefully

female leader of his village

The blond male got up

YOU CAN SAY NARUTO, KYUUBI or TSUNADE, and you dont have to say 'females' you can say women, it sounds less forced.

Kumo nins-

There is no plural for nin, there are no plural forms of Japanese words. so say Ninjas, Kumo Nin or Shinobi

A surprised look flashed across the blond medic upon looking at the informations before composing herself.-

Surprise flashed across her face upon looking at the information before she composing herself.

"I'm here to request something from you... I'm here to become a Konoha Shinobi..."-

besides sounding weird it doesn't work, try "I'm here to request something of you... I want to become a Konoha Shinobi..."

AND you definitely have a problem with the word sneak.

cloaked guys had sneaked on him

cloaked guys had sneaked in on him

NO ONE could sneaked into her office (makes no sense)

NO ONE could sneak into her office (present tense)

NO ONE could have sneaked into her office (past tense)

There are many more errors.

Kind a disapointment in the end that Naruto feels need join back up the village for almost no reason then some sense of 'honor'. I mean come on their ninja.. they really should only show honor to their family and maybe their clients.. not their enemies. They are not super hero's or samuria, their killers, assasins, ninja!

Add to that Konoha has managed to make enemies with almost every major hidden village, some minor ones and has some the top 3 or so S ranked criminals all come from it's village. Add in the corruption and favoritsm from the council and the clans the place doomed to fail on it's own, naruto really doesn't have to do anything. The whole joining up to prove to them what they missed out dumb as most the idea's fics have for Naruto to return to Konoha after getting super strong outside the village.

Please update again soon. Thanks.

Not bad though I kind thought it was kind stupid NO one was around to watch Koyo right after giving birth.. being hokages ex wife if nothing else put her in danger of enemy ninja. Which was supposively known in this fic. Add to that she didn't care Sarutobi blindly shouted out Naruto was teh Kyuubi container to civlian gathering for almost no reason? Even if in best of hopes you believe they wouldnt hurt a baby it just leak out incredibly important information to enemy villages.

Might as well said 'Kill him now before he becomes our secret weapon.. thats not so secret'. Honestly demon containers are often considered the Ultimate weapon in Naruto world, but only leaf and the 'Great professor' dumb enough shout out who theirs is to a wide civlian audience.. and just hope they won't spill the secret. Given how open they were about it any enemy spy could find that stuff out.. add that to the fact Konoha's secruity sucks...

you should put Naruto in team 7 like they would if they graduated the academy. that would be cool.

it was very good. i like option (a) the best.

its really good keep updating

This is a good story in all but please don't make this a story where naruto is all dark in stuff and wants to destroy konoha but decides to let the live and wants to be everybody's friend.

I Like it!

See ya!

FC

Interesting fanfic~

Naruto's mum's name is Uzumaki Kushina and she's from Whirlpool Country.

Maybe u should change Koyu to Kushina?

And the 4th Hokage's name is Namikaze Minato,

I don't mind the names , but I thought you'd like to know.

I like your story VERY MUCh and hope you update soon!

You have my full support in this fanfic!

KEEP WRITING!