Wow...that was not what I was expecting...and very intriguing and well written... good job

So you wanted an unwilling haji, huh? Until the last two lines I didn't think he was like that.

This was just simply great.

huh? that was a good fic but oh so confusing

Extremely well-written! Bravo!

Very well written, very believable.

O...Cryptic and passionate...YAY!

you had a good idea but i got kinda confused at the end. it almost seems like you didn't finish it too

Oh my god.. This is a lovely fic Wish it were slightly longer, though... It's really perfect the way it is. A sequel, perhaps?

I sorta get it, but it's like one of those complex short stories you have to read for english class that no one really ever gets and seems to have a million hidden meanings and possibilities to what it COULD mean, but only one right answer to the question "what's happening?" or some such bit. Are you a writer? (not like, a person who writes. I mean, a professional writer.) I noticed that you don't have a 'complete' for this. Are you going to continue?

PS- I found no faults with this story. My inability to not exactly grasp it though I have several ideas of what, is my own brain at work. Given time, of course, even the most seemingly complex problems eventually sink in. :)

sincerely, nihogoneko

This is really great. A little taste of something intense keeps people hooked.

that was really interesting in a good way i liked it

Amazing... Seriously, This is one of the best one shots I have ever read. And Haji was so in character.

"It is as natural as the bowing of leaves to the wind: they trail willingly as if they were meant to bend all along." That was an amazing simile.

Adding it to my favorites.

I loved it, great work!

-Laura

This is one of my favorites Blood fics, even thought I see Haji as someone a little more... "responsive" to Saya (but still, it's completely IC to put him that way, when Saya is not "Saya", but the bloodlusting queen). I really do hope you'll write more with Blood Plus. :)

liked it :)