Reviews for The Fourth
Anonymous214 chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
I know this is really late, but at the end of chapter eight you said that you had been attacked and were in a coma for two days. I hope that you're doing okay.
AnjoRemix chapter 8 . 10/19/2012
oh wow O.O and it's still incomplete q.q
Melikalilly chapter 8 . 5/25/2011
this is a good story and i hope you decide to continue it
Reader chapter 7 . 5/25/2010
Most asshole fic i ever read
Karasu Kagami chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
Okay. Love this fic but now im so confused. Is Kyubbi or Jiraiya evil? Cuz...i like Kyubbi do to your portraial and greatly dislike Jiraya. But the friendship/rape seemed planned by the 4th so now im...well...confused? please post another chapter soon! i cant wait for my questions to be answered! ;)

-Karasu
InARealPickle chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
OMG

That was a WTF moment if ever there was one!
Cjonwalrus chapter 8 . 12/13/2008
Wow this had me confused for a while, but then you drew it all together beautifully
xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 8 . 8/24/2008
Hm... interesting. Write more?
Novocain chapter 8 . 1/18/2008
Okay...I like it! A lot, actually. It's a little confusing at first, but everything makes sense now. I can't wait to see what you're going to do with this.
PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 8 . 11/18/2007
Wow... This is pretty twisted
creativesm75 chapter 8 . 9/23/2007
wow... this is crazy. so naruto is not naruto and... wow.
Mistical Kat chapter 8 . 8/25/2007
What an intense story! This is definetly one of the weirdest plot's that I've come across. Anyway, please update soon.
XMatchBookX chapter 8 . 8/20/2007
...? what the hell? lmao its a good story and all.. but I still have no SWEET clue what is going on... :S
XMatchBookX chapter 5 . 8/20/2007
I have no SWEET clue the the hell is going on! lmao from the first chapter I didn't know whats going on and now im even more confused. I seriously dont know what the hell is happening.
shujouteki gekido chapter 8 . 6/4/2007
good story confuzing but good
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