| Reviews for The Fourth |
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Anonymous214 chapter 1 . 1/23/2015 I know this is really late, but at the end of chapter eight you said that you had been attacked and were in a coma for two days. I hope that you're doing okay. |
AnjoRemix chapter 8 . 10/19/2012 oh wow O.O and it's still incomplete q.q |
Melikalilly chapter 8 . 5/25/2011 this is a good story and i hope you decide to continue it |
Reader chapter 7 . 5/25/2010 Most asshole fic i ever read |
Karasu Kagami chapter 8 . 8/28/2009 Okay. Love this fic but now im so confused. Is Kyubbi or Jiraiya evil? Cuz...i like Kyubbi do to your portraial and greatly dislike Jiraya. But the friendship/rape seemed planned by the 4th so now im...well...confused? please post another chapter soon! i cant wait for my questions to be answered! ;) -Karasu |
InARealPickle chapter 2 . 1/22/2009 OMG That was a WTF moment if ever there was one! |
Cjonwalrus chapter 8 . 12/13/2008 Wow this had me confused for a while, but then you drew it all together beautifully |
xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 8 . 8/24/2008 Hm... interesting. Write more? |
Novocain chapter 8 . 1/18/2008 Okay...I like it! A lot, actually. It's a little confusing at first, but everything makes sense now. I can't wait to see what you're going to do with this. |
PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 8 . 11/18/2007 Wow... This is pretty twisted |
creativesm75 chapter 8 . 9/23/2007 wow... this is crazy. so naruto is not naruto and... wow. |
Mistical Kat chapter 8 . 8/25/2007 What an intense story! This is definetly one of the weirdest plot's that I've come across. Anyway, please update soon. |
XMatchBookX chapter 8 . 8/20/2007 ...? what the hell? lmao its a good story and all.. but I still have no SWEET clue what is going on... :S |
XMatchBookX chapter 5 . 8/20/2007 I have no SWEET clue the the hell is going on! lmao from the first chapter I didn't know whats going on and now im even more confused. I seriously dont know what the hell is happening. |
shujouteki gekido chapter 8 . 6/4/2007 good story confuzing but good |