amazing

F**k off sicko.

I love the story so far. I have read a second chance at life and bloody skies. So I can see the theme. But I think it should have been slowed down a bit. It seems to me rushed. Tell more about the classes, the exams, and the people they must be seeing at a new school like this. It seems kinda like a crack fic.

Just a tiny note since it really bugs me. The Egyptian Sun God is Ra not Raw.

Not to be rude, but I studied Egypt in Social Studies 1 week ago and their sun god is called Ra... I mean no disrespect.

1- No, keep Zain and Merle. It makes for easier reading.
2-Personally? HELL YEAH
3-Absolutely not. Yuck *glares at the idiot redhead*
4-Naaaaw... Maybe a 'soul enchanter'?
5-Go back to Hogwarts to do Dumbles&Co in, not tests. Those need to be in Canada. As it IS a magical school, his tests should be legitimate.
6-Aw, do you have to? You could pair him up with Drey and kill the Weasel?
7-Maybe a bit of a heavy discussion and he will need to 'prove' his worth to the professor and sticks it to the professor?
8-Drey none. Make it a 'demonic trait' to have several forms? Kai... anything that flies, but no bat.

i love that last bit. "Mhmm, my magic decided it wanted to eat a dementor." LOL!

wank master has the right idea.

KILL ALL HOMOSEXUAL'S !

nice

just thought to let you know the egyptian god is Ra not Raw.

... Not sure why Tonto is not an appropriate nickname. Since it doesn't mean "You're stupid", just "stupid." "Eres tonto" would be "you're stupid."

I love how you've portrayed an insane!Harry. I personally love a good dose of crazyness - more so if it's Harry! - I love how you've made him cackle...oddly, I've always thought Harry was a more cackley somewhat giggly gay guy...shame Rowling didn't make him gay...would've been so much better

please keep writing

kwl storee