Reviews for Silhouette |
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Kittenn1011 chapter 13 . 4/18/2012 You had a pretty interesting story up until the end, where you resolved all conflict without actually writing how everything happened. Rule One of writing a story: the characters are not allowed to dramatically change off screen. Character development is one of the most important things of the story: up there with plot and readable grammar. Good story, but you're second last chapter had the characters only beginning to solve their problems and then the last is ten years after its been resolved. That, dear, is bad writing. |
I Know I'm A Dreamer chapter 7 . 12/22/2011 I'm glad, Daisuke. . *30 Seconds To Mars-This Is War* |
KitsuneDango chapter 13 . 7/19/2010 *clapping*crying* that was beautiful! so sad im so glad you decided to make it happy instead of killing people at the end! your a genius! |
TricksterAries chapter 13 . 8/29/2009 What an amazing story. Very very worth the read. It is hard to find a good SatoDai and this one was fantastic! Take care :) |
Cookiefan57 chapter 13 . 10/5/2008 It was confusing and very good fanfic. Reechan |
tigergirl104 chapter 13 . 9/29/2008 Wow. This is such a great Story! This has got to be my favorite one out of them all. If you ever feel like writing another one of these I will absolutely read it. Thank you for the great read. |
deadsnowwhite chapter 13 . 9/20/2008 this is an amazing story an i think everyone should read it! this was amazingly real |
Misaki Kaito chapter 13 . 7/25/2008 This is the best fic I've EVER READ. I applaud you on a fic very well done. It had Angst in all the right places, and it was beautifully written. Write some more! You're good enough for it! Bye! Ja Ne! |
Polish chapter 13 . 7/6/2008 -Wipes eyes- Wow...that was a very good fic! -bows- you did a very good job! Im still waiting though for her next book in this series though...and her other series the candidate for goddess... |
Fuzzy Eared chapter 13 . 6/15/2008 Well I would've liked to have had at least one more chapter in between the last and second to last, but I do really like how you tied up this story. By showing them 'grown up' and alluding to it throughout the story, you really managed to make it more human. And who cares that you fudged with the cannon? It is fanfiction afterall. :) Fyi, I read this all in one go - uncooperative wi-fi and all. |
Cha The Emerald Panther chapter 13 . 3/30/2008 WOOT WOOT I LOVE THIS STOWIE X3 ~ Cookie |
Satsuki007 chapter 13 . 2/18/2008 I liked it. Very good. _ |
Ario Hikari chapter 13 . 11/19/2007 This fic is just amazing, I stayed up late (When I shouldn't have) to finish reading it~ |
Amber chapter 13 . 9/21/2007 ...wow. I'm speechless. 0.0 And the storyline is about the same too. Like how Dark and Krad got reincarnated, by the way. I'm tempted to write my own fanfic (when I'm not being to lazy to actually do it!) Dark has a rather foul mouth when he's annoyed, doesn't he? Kind of like some people I could name. ;D |
Firebreather339 chapter 13 . 6/7/2007 I love your story! Your a great writer, never stop, okay? |