That's it? No No No, it can't end like this! AAArrrghhhh

I was wondering if you are going to finish this book? Because it's one of my favorites :)

Man, what a revelation! I wish the rest of the story was posted too, though. Is there any chance you'll finish this?

Brilliant, can't wait to keep reading.

I just started reading this fic today, and so far, I love it. I'll admit, I rarely read gen-fic, but this is just wonderful. I love how you've captured Neville, so honest and real. I love how you consider the different points of view of the different characters and the tension between them. Like Augusta and Andromeda and Tonks. I think many people forget that Andromeda's sister tortured the Longbottoms and things like this are just not easy to forgive. Similarly, the conflict between Tonks and Andromeda; Andromeda who just wants the best for her daughter and not subject her to what she had to go through when she was growing up. It's beautiful!

And your Neville! Where do I begin? He has a personality, he has problems, he is still a bit scared, unsure of himself, and he is just trying to figure it all out. You empathise with him. This is just brilliant! I look forward to rading more of this fic! Fantastic job!

this is a really excellent fic!

I love Lupin not only teaching but TEACHING teaching! And to Tonks! And Neville! lovely. also love that Tonks' patronus was a caterpillar.

I really liked this, to be honest. Had a lot of fun reading it and there's so much potential in it, too bad its not likely to be updated anytime soon hehe. I kinda wanna continue it, have a lot of ideas... at least I'd love to see more chapters.

Anyways, great story! Neville is always awesome :P

Not much of chance I know, but should you read this please write those last chapters...

These letters from everyone were really funny... I'm glad to know that Neville won't be punished for escaping the dementors...

And it's good that nobody actually died.

Sounds very promising - aren't you going to finish it?

I actually started reading this on Fiction Alley, but when I saw that it hadn't been updated in such a long time, I decided to check . I was so excited to see that you had so many chapters posted on here! Obviously, I have been really enjoying your story. I like that it is based on the perspective of Neville, who in many ways, is just as interesting if not more so than Harry. I've been waiting to see if Tonks had those papers for a few chapters. I hope you will decide to finish the fic. You are a very creative writer. :)

OMG! Please update soon I really like this story.

Wow that was a big relevation! ARe you going to continue the story anytime soon? I hope you do.

ohh you cant leave it there, what a cliffhanger! I'm loving this story and want to read more :)