Heh. So true

This is really impressively steamy and well-written. I love how you write the subtle antagonism between Jasmine and Jafar, how they are always at odds with each other even though they never directly fight. Wonderful work - I'll be recommending this at my forum. :)

I liked this, even though it was short, it really shows both of their personalities really well. You can imagine this happening behind the scenes. Wonderful job.

Really wonderful insight into Jafar here. Thank you for sharing with us.

This is so perfect I can't even. I've always admired short story writers for being able to pack so much meaning into a small amount of space, leaving every word a necessary component and every space a meaning within itself; this piece is a consummate example. Not even 500 words but wow.

Also, major points for the handling of underlying tension and creative/ story-relevant title. :D

Super

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I like your point of view in this fic, about Jasmine knowing how to play politics and having her own thoughts instead of just being the token "prize" that every good fairytale male protagonist deserves. Also, the point about Jafar actually desiring(maybe even loving, but certainly desiring, whether to simply possess and dominate or just lusting after her) suits both the theme of the fic and the original storyline well. A very good job all around. Bonus points and imaginary cookies for a very interesting title that even somewhat suits the story.:)

Very nice interaction/analysis drabble.

Dreamlike and essentially in character, gives me chills. :)

Super short, but well done! I admire a person that can pack that much meaning into such a little space. Almost poetry, really.

Oh, excellent! Bravo!

o_O

Wow. What an awesome take on these characters. I know Jafar/Jasmine is popular with Aladdin fans, but this actually makes it seem like a plausible pairing. Freaking amazing.

Very good!

Very nice! Like the tension and the barely contained hostility.

I've never considered this pairing before...

Isn't Jafar bald?

Aladdin's got a full head of jet-black hair.

Oh yes, I'm superficial.

Very well written piece, I like the characterization here.